Goudao Starts with the Title

? Comment deleted? I just want to talk about why the protagonist always has a kind of mysterious self-confidence. There are only eleven places in the entire sect, and he always feels that he, a sixth-level qi practitioner who is openly practicing, can get in if he wants to.

The original idea was quite good, but it turned out that a prostitute scene had to be added. I was angry because of a prostitute, and I was speechless. She was just a prostitute. Why did I care about her? Just change it to another one!

Gou Dao attracts everyone to read, but the protagonist is not at all serious. The story is blunt and the logic is confusing. Copying is also a skill, but don't take it for granted. This book is garbage and a waste of time.

No, I came with high expectations, but I was defeated by the plot of the prostitute at the beginning. This part is really smelly and long, half pornographic, not good at all, and the plot does not advance at all. It only writes embarrassing flirting plots. Most of the male video authors nowadays are like this. If they don't write PCs, don't go to brothels, the protagonist is not a man. All the books are the same, nine out of ten are prostitutes, and there is also a stallion who licks the dog... This one is especially written a lot, and there is no sense of empathy at all, such as dancing seductively, rejecting a long-legged lady, and there are so many descriptions of a small lolita. You asked the lolita to do an otaku dance, which is quite cute, and the short-legged and flat-chested striptease, the protagonist can't control it, how funny is it? Nowadays, readers don't like to read novels with female protagonists. It's not because they are annoyed by the role of female protagonists. It's because they can't write female protagonists well. Over and over again, they are just yyy plots that are too fleshy. It's really boring. It's not that you don't write female protagonists and insist on various yy plots. It will be interesting. I suggest you write more about career and advance the plot. After reading more than ten chapters, it's already five or sixty-seven chapters just entering a brothel. It's just describing a prostitute and there is no plot at all. It's too boring.

What are you worried about? There are eleven places, and there is only one at the top of each peak. What does this kind of thing have to do with him, a fourth-level Qi practitioner who is farming? If you can enter the secret realm later and come back directly, I will give you one star.

It's not easy to pull weeds. Has the author never pulled weeds or eaten a peach? At most, the roots of grass and crops are intertwined and difficult to pull out!

Intrigue and intrigue cannot be ignored. If anything is wrong in the ordinary world, others will know it clearly. What's more, the protagonist, whether it is fate, blood, body, appearance, person, sexual experience, traces, background, power, etc., Etc., As long as one link is exposed, it will not be discussed. To be a true Taoist, one has to be sophisticated in Gu's miscellaneous ways. You have to wear several layers of skin for everything, and you have to be able to run for your life and track back, otherwise you will be directly exposed if you are tricked by a more powerful person. Lie detection, soul searching, fortune-telling, backward reasoning, and deduction, the protagonist is probably not good at it.

It's okay, but the author shouldn't make the protagonist a eunuch.

It's all water, and the proficiency level is very low. I can't find one that's more concise. Just learn one skill, keep one as a pet, and practice your skills and spells to become more awesome.

I am a veteran author. I have read a few of your urban novels and now I am starting to write fairy tale novels.