Cultivation of Immortality: Starting from Fu Cultivation

Let's just read it. The plot written by the author is quite contradictory. The protagonist has no worries about his lifespan, and then the protagonist says that he is not in a hurry, and the next time he is in a hurry. He cultivates the four immortal arts, and has all kinds of skills. He has mastered them to a level that even the geniuses of the sect cannot reach in a few years. The blessed land and spiritual roots are also growing fast. Although the protagonist is dead, the unused lifespan makes people feel that there is no need to exist. The protagonist makes people feel There is something behind that is urging me, but the environment arranged by the author is very safe. I don't understand. It's okay that you arranged the time in units of hundreds of years. Others are An Qianqian Ji. However, in the past few decades of the protagonist, I saw that it only takes thirty years for the protagonist to upgrade from cultivating immortality to the blessed land. You should spend some time on something as complex as cultivating immortality and the four arts. The author has made too many mistakes. It feels like he is arranging to rush to practice clones to unfold the plot.

In most novels, one spiritual root is strong and the other spiritual root is weak, but the opposite is true. This is fine. It just doesn't suit other people's tastes, but most people can still accept it. After all, each novel has its own setting. But how strong is your golden elixir period? It will be passed down for thousands of years. There is also a generational hierarchy for hundreds of years. I wish that the three generations of ancestors and grandchildren are all from the same generation. The world of immortal cultivation doesn't care at all. You insist on posting an explanation, which increases the contradiction. , And your ability to play awkward games is really strong. The protagonist is an ordinary person, and he was even better than me in the previous life. I don't know what the protagonist is like. I don't know what I am like. When I see the family token, I immediately associate it with it. Inexplicably, it has a lot more temperament. I was just in a daze for a while, and the elder next to me noticed it. What? Your temperament has materialized. I didn't carefully look at your elder's realm. I don't know, but it shouldn't be beyond the golden elixir stage. You are a foundation builder. Do you have such a keen perception? I also looked at the protagonist, and the protagonist also noticed it, looked away, and sighed inexplicably.

It's very bad. After reading four chapters, you can tell it's Chang Sheng Gou Dao Liu, and it's the most boring Liu Shui Wen, and there probably won't be any plot. Just looking at the setting of the novel, the male protagonist has a very cool golden finger, unlimited lifespan, but only a single spiritual root. In this novel, the more spiritual roots, the stronger the talent. Anyway, you have to be a loser, at most you have reached the threshold of cultivation. Then it became the so-called Fu Xiu. Before I clicked on it, I thought Fuxiu meant good luck or something, a golden finger that only belonged to the male protagonist. But I didn't expect that Fujiu was a g. The author sets that after becoming a blessing cultivator, the cultivation speed will be reduced by a hundred times, and then the talent will be slowly improved. He is really not a human being. Is there anything else necessary to watch the subsequent plot? My guess is that it's just that Gou is cultivating slowly, and it will take hundreds or thousands of years to reach a big level, and the further you go, the slower it becomes. And since the male protagonist has an infinite lifespan, he always has to learn something, such as formations, practice elixirs, etc., Which can just be used to exchange for some resources. And doesn't the male protagonist still have parents? There is a high probability that he will die of old age in the early stages. If the author was more disgusting, he could write that the parents had another child, and then a thousand years later, the younger generation got into big trouble, and then shouted for the ancestor to come out.

The setting is okay, but the psychological description is a mess. Anyone who has a little kindness towards the protagonist will have great trust in the protagonist. With just one word from the elder, the protagonist felt a sense of belonging to the sect and immediately changed his habits in the sect for the past five or six years. But the protagonist still thinks that this is the elder's special care (even though the author also wrote so). However, why do you, who are in the middle of your Qi training, let an elder who has just started to pay so much attention to your state of mind? ? Co-authoring an article about someone else to scare the monkeys, can it reasonably make the protagonist feel moved? The setting is good, the protagonist's mood is good

What if you evolve to the Great Thousand World and 30% of the income from your world belongs to your family?

Fujian is quite novel, but the author's writing is not very good. It is probably because the outline is full of loopholes. For example, if he is the master of the blessed land, can outsiders come in? So why do so many people suffer from mental breakdown? There are so many people coming and going, and they can all enter the blessed land. When the time comes, the sect will ask a few blessed land reserves to lead an area in other people's blessed lands, or bring a few newcomers to the sect. If others can enter, there will be plenty of fun. How come so many people have mental breakdowns? There are too many holes in the details and they cannot withstand calculation.

The most unacceptable thing is that the protagonist always gives a lot of good things to this person and that person, and others, such as the Golden Core stage, give a lot of things from the Nascent Soul stage and the Transformation stage. To others, they are all just ordinary and familiar people. How can a shopkeeper who has bought things in a store become a good friend? How come we have become old friends? How come a girl who has never spoken to the family in her childhood has become one of several good friends. For example, Zhu Dafu met his son a hundred years later. He sighed about the time he spent cultivating as an immortal and felt nostalgic for the death of the few familiar people. He also gave his son some supplies to help him cultivate immortality. In this way, he wrote about everything. It's not like the protagonist, some people become good friends and old friends without even meeting or saying a word, and there is no plot development. They often give people things that others will never get in a lifetime. Is it about cultivating immortality or helping the poor? It's just a joke.

It was said to be about blessing cultivation, but I ended up reading twenty or thirty chapters while I was still out shopping and refining elixirs. I was really procrastinating. After looking through the catalog, I found that it took me forty or fifty chapters before I started to open up the blessed land. Also, he was about to become a Buddhist cultivator, and he understood the situation. As a result, he asked his family for support, so he took some seeds and alchemy skills to pass on. He was not a buddy, he knew that he needed to grow elixirs, and he also knew that he needed to use elixirs to make elixirs. Why don't you want a piece of Ling Zhifu's inheritance anymore? You still have to change it in the sect. Furthermore, the protagonist is not like a second-generation person in the sect at all. He is shocked when asked about the price of a pill, and he seems to be particularly inexperienced in the world.

The plot design is very innovative, but every time the people around the protagonist are forced to show concern for him, it feels awkward. The tone of the whole book suddenly became low! The author could save some unnecessary description or profiling. For details, please refer to the elbow and newspaper selling techniques.

At the beginning, almost 10 chapters are used to introduce the world background of this book. There are some special contradictions. A family has existed for tens of thousands of years? And how many millions of people does this family have? I feel that the author has no concept of time and number of people. He just writes as grandly as he can. No matter whether he can fill this hole or not. In other immortality novels, "Building the Foundation", Jin Dan is a strong person, and Nascent Soul can start a sect. The best foundation of this book is that the waiters in the chamber of commerce are at the bottom. Jin Dan is the little Kami, and Nascent Soul is the better steward. 😮There are as many gods as dogs in the back. I read the background of your story. Hundreds of novels about cultivating immortals are not that good. The result is as I thought, and the writing becomes worse and worse. The author's writing style cannot handle such a large world background, which makes many plot chapters very illogical. Five years have passed in the first dozen chapters🤐 What the hell does Fujian do? I started practicing alchemy even before I started farming🤐The main character's system is also designed to be very easy to operate. I feel like this book is just like the author's practice. This book gave me a feeling of jumping when I step too far🤐