Immortal Weapon Refiner
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Birth, old age, illness and death are human nature. Li Qing, who was not afraid of death, suddenly saw how much life he had left, and now he panicked! Fortunately, I can gain longevity by refining weapons, so let's live for tens of thousands of years first! [Successfully refining an ordinary weapon: the refined iron war weapon will reward you with five months of life! Successfully refining the best magic weapon: Tianluo Banner, rewarding seventy years of life! Successfully refining the Tongtian Lingbao: Life-Destroying Furnace will reward you with a life span of three thousand years! (Eternal Life Gouwen + Weapon Refining + Two Realms)
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Being chased by a large sect? Wouldn't it be enough to hide in another world for half a year or five years? Do you have to waste time? Do you think the sect can't find out your origin? The Liu family can't find your origin? A force that controls an area can't even control the territory it controls, so why should it be called a big force? Are you still running away to the secular world? If you didn't go, those mortals wouldn't die, right? Even though you weren't the one who killed him, it was also because of you, right? And you have the murderous storage bag with you? Worried that others can't track you? You kill the Liu family monks and you know how to take them to another world to kill? Do you know how to hide everything on him first? If you kill a monk from a sect, you can't take him to another world and wait until you are safe before killing him? And running around with stolen goods? The female monk from the Liu family who is your guardian didn't intercede for you either? Maybe they will come to kill you? Do you blindly lick someone because they are beautiful?
If a fool takes the slightest risk, I think he is stupid.
Membership is not free, I feel this app is a trap
Chapter 271
In the past, every disciple of the Liu family knew that the storage bag was hidden in the polar night world to hide from tracking. Don't you remember that you killed a big sect member now? The higher the level, the more degraded the brain will be
To write the immortality pen well, you have to make use of this lifespan.
Regardless of whether it is Eternal Life or Wenzhao Gong's book "The Immortal from the Troubled Times of Demons and Martial Arts", people first spend time cultivating the eight classics step by step, and their life span is very willing to be spent and let go, instead of being life-sucking like this novel. It seems that the Immortality Hanging is used as a monitor. The protagonist does not take advantage of immortality at all. Instead, he is as anxious as those traditional upgrade stories about reaching the highest level in one year, becoming a god in three years, and transcending in five years. What are you anxious about?
Normally, we all know that the protagonist in a book has an aura, but the aura can be there, but it can't be too big, right? It doesn't matter why the protagonist can extend his life by forging iron. What matters is how the protagonist was chosen directly and without mistake to become an apprentice. Can it be written that the protagonist's family is a blacksmith, so he has some background? Can it be written that the protagonist was an ancestral craftsman in his previous life? Can you write that the protagonist's panel is marked with a pattern about blacksmithing? Being chosen to become an apprentice is so natural. Could it be the result of the protagonist's hard work? If you are not good at writing and don't know how to write, you can just write a rough outline.
Author: In ancient times, was it very low to live to be in your 60s? I mentioned earlier that if you do some business and survive, it would be good to live to be 70 years old in modern times. The first few hundred words in the first chapter are inconsistent. You can change it to about 50, which will make it much smoother.
Haha, it's another person trying to sell dog meat.
Author, you shouldn't write fairy tales, it's appropriate for you to write martial arts novels
The writing is okay! It started from the time when we worked together to refine the Foundation Establishment Pill, and the writing became a bit mindless! What do you mean, there are two more spiritual stones that can only compensate you? Only if you have three can you get one? Although the main drug is produced by someone else, aren't the auxiliary drugs important? Collecting also takes time and effort, right? Still protecting others? It seems like the protagonist has a grudge against the Liu family, right? You said that the other party knows that you killed her core clan members, is she seeking revenge from you or is she going to remember your kindness? The other party doesn't even want to look at you when you work together to refine the foundation-building elixir? Still haven't explained the problem? People don't look down on you at all, and their first feeling is that they hate you. The protagonist has poor spiritual qualifications. Do you think a low-quality foundation-building pill can build a foundation? A widow asks her child to worship you as her teacher. If you refuse, she will kneel in front of your door? Isn't this moral kidnapping? Why should I accept it if I am not a relative or a friend? If you do this to those big sects, you just need to kneel in front of the door and you can't just enter? None of your friends have seen you supporting any of them? A heartless man would look upon a widow as pitiful? Don't feel conflicted? Immortal cultivation is about cause and effect. Are you afraid that the apprentice you accept will cause you trouble? Dare you teach him how to make weapons? Is this different from having a master or a disciple? It's just that you don't have the status of master and apprentice, right? Not the same
A man who has trouble still takes risks, why do I think he is so stupid?
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Official(57)Scraped 20d ago
Being chased by a large sect? Wouldn't it be enough to hide in another world for half a year or five years? Do you have to waste time? Do you think the sect can't find out your origin? The Liu family can't find your origin? A force that controls an area can't even control the territory it controls, so why should it be called a big force? Are you still running away to the secular world? If you didn't go, those mortals wouldn't die, right? Even though you weren't the one who killed him, it was also because of you, right? And you have the murderous storage bag with you? Worried that others can't track you? You kill the Liu family monks and you know how to take them to another world to kill? Do you know how to hide everything on him first? If you kill a monk from a sect, you can't take him to another world and wait until you are safe before killing him? And running around with stolen goods? The female monk from the Liu family who is your guardian didn't intercede for you either? Maybe they will come to kill you? Do you blindly lick someone because they are beautiful?
If a fool takes the slightest risk, I think he is stupid.
Membership is not free, I feel this app is a trap
Chapter 271
In the past, every disciple of the Liu family knew that the storage bag was hidden in the polar night world to hide from tracking. Don't you remember that you killed a big sect member now? The higher the level, the more degraded the brain will be
To write the immortality pen well, you have to make use of this lifespan.
Regardless of whether it is Eternal Life or Wenzhao Gong's book "The Immortal from the Troubled Times of Demons and Martial Arts", people first spend time cultivating the eight classics step by step, and their life span is very willing to be spent and let go, instead of being life-sucking like this novel. It seems that the Immortality Hanging is used as a monitor. The protagonist does not take advantage of immortality at all. Instead, he is as anxious as those traditional upgrade stories about reaching the highest level in one year, becoming a god in three years, and transcending in five years. What are you anxious about?
Normally, we all know that the protagonist in a book has an aura, but the aura can be there, but it can't be too big, right? It doesn't matter why the protagonist can extend his life by forging iron. What matters is how the protagonist was chosen directly and without mistake to become an apprentice. Can it be written that the protagonist's family is a blacksmith, so he has some background? Can it be written that the protagonist was an ancestral craftsman in his previous life? Can you write that the protagonist's panel is marked with a pattern about blacksmithing? Being chosen to become an apprentice is so natural. Could it be the result of the protagonist's hard work? If you are not good at writing and don't know how to write, you can just write a rough outline.
Author: In ancient times, was it very low to live to be in your 60s? I mentioned earlier that if you do some business and survive, it would be good to live to be 70 years old in modern times. The first few hundred words in the first chapter are inconsistent. You can change it to about 50, which will make it much smoother.
Haha, it's another person trying to sell dog meat.
Author, you shouldn't write fairy tales, it's appropriate for you to write martial arts novels
The writing is okay! It started from the time when we worked together to refine the Foundation Establishment Pill, and the writing became a bit mindless! What do you mean, there are two more spiritual stones that can only compensate you? Only if you have three can you get one? Although the main drug is produced by someone else, aren't the auxiliary drugs important? Collecting also takes time and effort, right? Still protecting others? It seems like the protagonist has a grudge against the Liu family, right? You said that the other party knows that you killed her core clan members, is she seeking revenge from you or is she going to remember your kindness? The other party doesn't even want to look at you when you work together to refine the foundation-building elixir? Still haven't explained the problem? People don't look down on you at all, and their first feeling is that they hate you. The protagonist has poor spiritual qualifications. Do you think a low-quality foundation-building pill can build a foundation? A widow asks her child to worship you as her teacher. If you refuse, she will kneel in front of your door? Isn't this moral kidnapping? Why should I accept it if I am not a relative or a friend? If you do this to those big sects, you just need to kneel in front of the door and you can't just enter? None of your friends have seen you supporting any of them? A heartless man would look upon a widow as pitiful? Don't feel conflicted? Immortal cultivation is about cause and effect. Are you afraid that the apprentice you accept will cause you trouble? Dare you teach him how to make weapons? Is this different from having a master or a disciple? It's just that you don't have the status of master and apprentice, right? Not the same
A man who has trouble still takes risks, why do I think he is so stupid?
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