Slytherin's Newest Student

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The plot is not bad, but the connection is a bit flawed. The darkening of the friend after his death and the alienation from Harry and the others feel a bit stiff. He is obsessed with magic and knows Voldemort's trap, but he just goes ahead. Although he explained this matter before, I am very unhappy. I know it is the need of the plot, but I just feel unhappy. The behavior of the protagonist later is very cowardly and aggrieved. I can't stand it, but overall it is good.

Personally, I feel that the protagonist revealed everything to the two women. After all, modern people must have some scheming. I am now in my thirties, and what about Voldemort? He said something and everything. It is impossible for a person with such great ambitions to guard against everything, right?

The protagonist is wise, courageous, and ambitious. It revolves around the main story line of Harry Potter, and the characters and battles are described vividly. This is a different Harry Potter. Challenges and traps have already been prepared in front of the characters, and darkness has already fed the evil people. In order to save someone important to him, the protagonist is placed between darkness and light. As a spurned character, he must do what he thinks is the right behavior at all costs. In this era of magic, watch how the protagonist plays with professors and students in the palm of his hand. Let him use his own ambition to spell out his own glory. The pace of the plot is just right, and the story is extremely comfortable to watch. The battle between evil and justice has just begun, and the confused characters are still just buds, looking forward to future stories. Come on author, Hogwarts Express has just begun, there is still a long way to go, don't give up, give us a wonderful journey with your heart!

After reading dozens of chapters, maybe my expectations for this book were too high. The more I read, the more disappointed I became. No matter how ordinary people are, as the protagonist, the author should let him have his own abilities. A person of several decades would actually collapse his most firm belief because of a person who has only been with him for a year and has no real feelings for him! ! ! Just because she talked to you a few more words and trained you a few times... Use her death as motivation to live? To be honest, I really don't see any value in her other than being a drag. Even if the protagonist is not a person without emotions, please at least let him pretend to be ruthless. At least for this kind of meaninglessness, don't have things that drag him down. The protagonist is destined to be a hero. Don't believe that life is meaningless without emotion. Emotions will get tired after a long time. So I don't understand what you want to express in these chapters. Is the protagonist's love deep? ? Also, please don't tell me that you don't have to compete without paying, and that it's not easy for the author. Do you want to hear my comments?

The author should add a little more. Watch it several times. After all, details determine success or failure.

Reading foreign fan fiction and not liking Chinese characters as protagonists is like reading anti-Japanese novels and not liking foreigners as protagonists.

It seems that a villain protagonist with such a personality will not end well! The characters are not three-dimensional enough. A person's changes should be shown in details rather than directly changing from the main line. This will make the characters not three-dimensional.

Don't know why the rating is so high!

This is one of the best HP fanfics I've ever read.