In This Hogwarts Without a Savior

First of all, this book is an out-and-out dark novel. I would not be surprised if one day I read about a depressed patient committing suicide. It is no exaggeration to say that with my more than 4,000 hours of reading time (including other software), this is the best Harry Potter fanfic I have ever read. He touched me very deeply. I opened this book at two o'clock this evening. The time is now 9:43. It took me about six hours to read this book to chapter 130. During this period, I burst into tears at least five times. I have mixed feelings about the characters in these books that I grew up with. When I read the original text for the first and second time, I didn't feel so deeply. I came into contact with the translated version of Harry Potter when I was seven years old. It is no exaggeration to say that I have read it since I was a child. I started reading online articles when I was ten years old, and probably came into contact with fan circles when I was eleven or twelve years old. Since I came into contact with the fandom, I began to frequently read some Harry Potter second editions. Most of the feelings these books bring to me are refreshing. Every protagonist studied and grew up in Hogwarts Castle. But in these second creations, I felt another side of different characters. Professor McGonagall's seriousness but always caring for students has been deeply engraved in my mind. Although the younger Professor Flitwick is not physically cute, his spiritual cuteness is still very memorable. When I read about Professor Flitwick's broken arm, I was so heartbroken that I couldn't breathe. Although I can't experience the true residual value of losing an arm, my legs and feet are very inconvenient due to some problems during my development. I started practicing roller skating when I was three years old. Day after day I felt the joy that riding the wind brought me, but I also encountered some problems. As I write this, I haven't felt the wind in a year. It feels like someone is tying you to the bed with a leather strap with little spikes so you can't move. Not being able to feel the dexterity of your feet, only the weight of them lying on the bed. It's a long way to go. When I finished reading the first volume, my thought was, luckily you are here, professors. Having said all that, I also complained. Now I just hope that the author can fully present this story. In the end I didn't know what to say. Anyway, as long as you can resist the knife, this is an excellent book.

Why do some people think wizards are at a disadvantage against Muggles? The power of magic is not reflected in destructive power. For example, portkeys, floo powder, and apparation can travel hundreds of miles in an instant. Any maneuvering or blockade is a joke. Severe fire can burn precious materials or even a city to ashes. Veritaserum and Legilimency can be used to obtain intelligence. It is a dimensionality-reducing blow. The Imperius Curse can control officials. The Flying Curse can control matter. The portrait in the Muggle Prime Minister's residence at the beginning of the sixth part cannot be removed, which shows that magic is absolute. The third part also implies that the time turner cannot change the past, because the effect has already appeared before it is planted. Otherwise, wizards can still tamper with history, so in the eyes of wizards, ordinary people can only be Muggles.

Except that the world view is relatively novel, what I write is not attractive at all. It didn't make me feel the charm and magic of the magical world at all. Will there be interesting magical animals in the wilderness that the magic carriage passes by? In the difficult times of Hogwarts, have teachers' teaching methods not changed? What spontaneous behaviors do students have to face huge challenges? Has Voldemort unified the entire wizarding world? What about other places outside the UK, isn't it possible to go there? What is the magical world like in other countries? The author didn't write anything that seemed interesting. Everything I write about is of no interest to me at all. In fact, it doesn't matter who is the master of the magical world, nor does it matter who dies or is alive. There is only one important thing. I am only interested in how the protagonist creates interesting stories in this world. Unfortunately, it seems that the author does not want to write in this aspect at all.

I don't know why, but I always think it's better than the original (//∇//). The author's writing style is also very good, and the plot structure is very good^ω^

I finished reading it. I switched to this account before I ran out of money to read it on another account, so it didn't take long to read on this account. This book is still worth reading, and the author has a lot of imagination. This book is worth reading just for the imagination. But there are many problems with this book, many of which are the author's own. The first is the problem of eating books. For example, Jon signed a contract with the Malfoy family to take Dobby away, but the subsequent content does not reflect Jon's acquisition of Dobby at all. This is just one of the examples. If I type more, it will be suspected of being a spoiler. I won't go into it. The most serious thing is that the author's core setting has a major bug with the original Harry Potter. At least in my opinion, it is a very important bug that makes my reading experience not good. The author has been emphasizing that the wizard's magic cannot act on himself, so there is a ring as a plug-in to allow the pig's feet to allow magic to act on himself. But in fact, the wizard's own magic can act on himself. Otherwise, how can you explain the transformation? Isn't this just how the wizard casts a spell on himself and then produces a displacement effect? Perhaps it can be forcefully said that the effect is not on the wizard himself but on the space, but this does not make sense at all, because apparation will cause the wizard to have the sequelae of splitting, but he will not die directly after the split, but can be maintained for a period of time under the effect of magic. This is a bug in the wizard's casting of spells on himself. The other is that when other people cast Avada Kedavra on themselves, the effect is to kill people. If the magic does not work on the wizard himself, why can the death curse kill people? So whether you cast spells on others or cast spells on yourself, it can be proved that magic can work on the wizard himself, let alone Voldemort's black mist. If it can't work, what is the black mist? This bug caused the author to have serious problems with the core settings of the book. The contradictory settings between the second creation and the original work greatly affect the reading experience. I don't know what the author was thinking when he set this up. Obviously Apparition appears repeatedly in the author's own content. Didn't he notice that Apparition affects the wizard himself? Another minor problem is that the author's Chinese proficiency is not very good, and typos often appear. Even the word "鸩" for "drinking poison to quench thirst" is typed as "鸠". This is no longer a problem of typos. It's simply that the author doesn't know how to pronounce this idiom. This leads to frequent language errors and various word order problems in the novel, which really affects the reading experience. The summary is that I can give this book three stars. Although there are many problems, it has good ideas. It is still okay to read it when you are short of books.

I always feel that the heroine or the emotional line ruins the current dark tone

Advantages: This work is really a good product, the content is exquisite and interesting, the author's writing skills are excellent, every detail is very cleverly grasped, and the emotions of the characters are well rendered, flowing slowly like water on a small bridge, making people unable to put it down. Disadvantages: The daily updates are as short and weak as the author's, and I don't know where the author learned it out of context.

It's beautiful, it's really beautiful, and it doesn't have a bad character. I'm really tired of those articles about black Dumbledore, I'm tired of articles that constantly praise Si'an, and I also hate those about black Lily. This article can be said to have avoided all my faults. And I really like GGDA, although it doesn't have much description, but that's good. I don't like articles that focus on this throughout the article. It doesn't describe too many emotional lines and just follows the plot flow, which is good. I'm also tired of the whole story describing great love.

Each character is vividly portrayed, and the handling of character relationships, character emotions, and story foreshadowing are very good. It is really a rare and good book. I hope I don't want to be a eunuch.

When they came to sit down in the room, a teapot jumped up lightly and poured a cup of slightly hot black tea for both of them. They sat by the window, from where they could see the endless forest. "You actually learned to let go." "This doesn't mean letting go, it means being able to have no inhibitions for the result, and I know even better that Jon is a more suitable person than me." Dumbledore nodded. "So what happens now?" He looked at Grindelwald with a smile, "You have become an idle retiree, and Jon has officially taken over my job. To be honest, neither you nor I would have imagined that we would actually have such a stable old age." Grindelwald did not speak or look at Dumbledore, but looked at the forest illuminated by the sun. After a moment of silence, he suddenly said. "I've been here for most of my life, and I'm a little tired of it." "Then let's go out for a walk. To be honest, I never have time to take a good look at the world." Their eyes finally met again. "Are you inviting me?" Dumbledore shrugged. "What if?" Grindelwald snorted coldly, put down his teacup and stood up from his chair. Dumbledore couldn't help but said helplessly. "It's been more than half of my life, and even if you think about it now, it's actually in the past, right?" "I'm going to pack my things."