I Was Destined to Become a Saint in My Previous Life

The author's writing style and plot content are both good, but there are a lot of flaws in your cultivation realm. In the chapter about pretending to be Feng Ting, if there are more than ten thunder sounds, there is a slight chance of entering the realm of the gods, but later it is said that it will take more than a hundred thunder sounds. Then he also wrote that he could never pass the second level of the Gang Qi realm if he couldn't pass a hundred sounds. Doesn't that mean that every person in the Divine Mansion realm came from a hundred thunder sounds? So what are the advantages of the protagonist's thunderous voice? In the front, you wrote that the limit for ordinary people is ten rings, and then for the genius, it may be more than ten or twenty rings, and later you write that it is impossible to reach the divine realm with less than a hundred rings. The two chapters conflict with each other in terms of content. It is recommended that hundreds of revisions be made at the limit.

After three hundred chapters, since the protagonist went crazy, the writing has plummeted. The protagonist's personality charm has disappeared, and the plot has become coy and aggrieved. The book is really good at the beginning, but it depends on the author's control later on. If the middle period is not grasped well, it will be more difficult to write in the later period.

I read some fortune-tellings in the book and found out that the words didn't make sense. It seems that the author is afraid of getting too good grades, so he makes it more difficult for himself.

I haven't seen much, what's next? , I've only read a dozen chapters now, and I just feel a bit like a virgin.

The writing was very slow, and I couldn't stand it after more than sixty chapters. The plots before and after are similar, and sometimes even contradictory. The more you watch, the less interesting it becomes, as if you are playing with matryoshka dolls. The author pursues the so-called writing style too much, but in fact his skills are not enough. Painting a tiger will not turn out to be a dog, which is self-defeating. It would be better to write more plainly, with less nonsense and meaningless words. Although the subject matter is relatively new, the author wanted to write it well so much that he used too much force. It was a bit nondescript and very boring to read. I could fight the same boss and the same stage three times without success, and the same routine was used every time. Generally speaking, it might be interesting to read without thinking, since the subject matter is new after all, but the shortcomings are very big, and it is really unbearable and boring.

Like "Previous Life Simulator", the story of the magician is too long and tedious, and it is a bit embarrassing to imitate Feng Yun Xiong and dominate the world. Since fatalism is so strong? Since the past has become invincible? So what is the point for us readers to see the growth of the main protagonist? !

Let me promote this book. Ming disaster ink crow, by the way, add a bookshelf.

This book's insights into the human world are deeply rooted in people's hearts. Courage in the first life and protection in the second life. The author is trying hard to convey to us his longing for spiritual beliefs.

See only one life as food and grass, see another life as weeds

The book is okay, but it feels very expensive; the protagonist doesn't build a faction, and is looking for things to do with other factions every day. I feel like other factions are rubbish. The protagonist fights a group of people alone