I Am Cultivating Immortality in Troubled Times

It's too watery. The first chapter of this book is watery, and the back is even waterier. From chapter 266, the realm was upgraded to the fourth level of integration, and to chapter 301, it was not upgraded for 35 chapters (when I read it, chapter 301 was the latest chapter, so I commented on it), and chapter 296, entering the sky. There are a total of 9 levels in the Secret Realm of the Tao. After passing the first four levels, when I went to the fifth level, I started to mess up three chapters in a row and didn't get to the fifth level. When there is a breakthrough in cultivation level and I choose an entry, I usually finish selecting the entry in that chapter. If the entry is good, I have to go through one or two chapters before starting to choose. This author writes some main plot in each chapter, and then most of the plot is about environmental background, eating, drinking, eating, clothing, housing, transportation, nonsense literature, or writing new supporting characters, and then writing the stories and experiences of the new supporting characters. Several supporting characters have to talk nonsense, and use examples and metaphors to discuss various issues and principles. One chapter of trivial life matters can be completed in just one chapter. In particular, some plot entries have been written before and will be written again after a few chapters. There is also a local scenery and a stone in the protagonist's small world. I repeatedly write about how the protagonist likes this place, scenery and which stone to sit on. I also write about the taste of each food, whether it is crispy or soft, sweet or salty. There are also times when the author writes a separate "huh" every time he breathes in. The main character also makes a "hmm" sound when thinking about a problem, and breathes out a thick breath at every turn. It's really embarrassing to see this kind of writing. The author has written five books and reached Level 5, and he can still write such embarrassing descriptions. I have read a total of three books by the author, From "My Fortress with a Caliber of Three Thousand Meters" to "I Washed the Ground with Artillery in the Extraordinary World", and then to this book, there is no difference in the characters and plots of the protagonist, his brother and other supporting characters in these three books. They are all written in the same way without changing the ingredients (I have not read the other two books, and they are probably the same). The most important thing is that the author of these three books writes about extraordinary systems. It seems to me that both the protagonist and the supporting characters have extraordinary powers, and in other respects they are just ordinary people. , Eat, drink, poop and sleep at every turn, and how the protagonists of these three books are written in a pretentious manner. In the first two books, they wear suits, use crutches, keep a straight face and don't speak, put their weapons out as the background and then pretend to be awkward, but this book just can't stand it. An umbrella, an expressionless face, and the release of lightning acts as a background wall, which is awkward. Especially since the protagonists of these three books have obtained the ability or props of super long-distance group teleportation, they start to run around frantically to write water numbers for branch lines. Only when they have enough water, can they write the main line.

Those who like to quarrel with heaven and earth can watch it. This protagonist takes advantage of every opportunity. During the Qi training period, no matter whether the opponent is a foundation builder or a golden elixir or a Yuanying, he is not afraid of death, and he is lucky enough to survive every time. Anyway, he's pretty awesome. He'll fight anyone who can't beat him, and it doesn't matter whether he's dead or not. If he offends someone who's a few levels higher than him, he'll do it directly.

You want to be both serious and established at the same time. You want to make the protagonist awesome, but you also want to write more to push the level. Writing this way will only make your book more and more ruined.

I don't really like looking at group photos. Just read one chapter and combine it with the introduction to find out. Don't call me embarrassing, I gave it four stars. The score is only so that I can notice it next time, since I have already tried the poison before. After all, the title of the book is quite confusing.

I haven't finished reading it yet. I feel a little uncomfortable when I read it. There are many bugs. This is not the golden elixir promotion, but the raw material golden elixir is needed when promoting the golden elixir. Can you change it to something else? What else is needed? Nascent Soul Corpse, don't do this inherently problematic thing, okay? Just like whether God can lift himself,

There are too many bugs. The pink entry for Towering Giant is the only one, but another person with the entry for Towering Giant appears later?

If you combine together, you will be able to overcome the tribulation. I even wrote about Mahayana before.

To be honest, readers nowadays basically don't have that much patience. When I read this book, I never expected to read more than two hundred chapters.

The protagonist is a eunuch, so don't read it because of this

Personally, I feel that Shuangwen is not completely refreshing.