The Demon World I Designed
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The reborn Chen Qing became a hard-working student in ancient times. After living in poverty for ten years, he finally got a title on the gold medal list. He thought that he would become a scholar from now on. Chen Qing, who married Bai Fumei and reached the pinnacle of his life, was suddenly involved in a strange fantasy event. It was also at that time that he discovered that this world was not simple. There were man-eating monsters, demons that bewitched people's hearts, and immortals who were said to be immortal but extremely weird! What makes him even more incredible is that... These deadly things seem to be... Designed by himself! ! ! Group number 632123201, everyone is welcome to join the group to discuss the shortcomings of this book, hehe...
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Official(195)Scraped 20d ago
It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away
It's uncomfortable to watch, but the setting is okay. The first part is really attractive. The first 30 chapters have some flaws, but they're not big, so they're acceptable. The last 30 chapters are about the emperor giving the princess a concubine (a cuckold was given to his son and daughter respectively). The princess is stupid, sweet and brainless (I feel like my IQ is so high at the age of five), and the concubine's mother-in-law. The mother flirts with the son-in-law (verbally cuckolding the emperor). I feel it is better not to arrange a scene where the princess has contact with the protagonist. The emperor inexplicably grants a marriage and brings a concubine. The other princesses and consorts are not as special as you. This is not to tell others that there is a problem. These two girls are also related to Cui. The writing is really unreasonable. I want to watch it but can't, it's so uncomfortable, I've given three stars as a compromise
I still don't understand what's the point of writing this about Chen Ying? ? ?
Forcibly make a writing point? This book of yours is based on online IQ flow. The groundwork is very good. Why did Chen Ying come in if you have to write something missing? It's really very vicious. Obviously the IQs of the protagonist and villain are all online. The characters are well drawn and their personalities are very distinctive. But Chen Ying had to be added. Has TM changed its writer? A Tiangang-level spell, just give it to me? How many times has the protagonist met her? Do you believe her that much? Even if she is a genius, if you want to win over someone, don't you check her first? It's really like forcefully adding a wife. . . . . .
After reading so many books, I have to complain about this one. After dozens of chapters, I am still an ordinary person. How can I be so powerful when I talk about Shintoism all day long? It is the same as the Western Holy See. Without faith, I am a useless person. I have a great power at the beginning and don't use it for my own profession. I have to choose a rubbish. It disgusts me.
...
Why does it feel like my strength goes up and down, all kinds of logic dolls, but in fact it conflicts with many of the previous settings... Write, write, write, are you happy? I watched it for a long time with the free ticket, and finally got to the Dragon Palace section... How should I put it, it feels like a matryoshka doll with a different skin, the kind that is forced into a nesting doll. One moment he is above the first level, another moment he is the first level, one moment he is not, the other is awesome, scary, very powerful, he can defeat him, he can't beat him, he can't beat him... Then he can crush the second best in the human race... But in fact, the first part is fine, and there is still a little bit of basic logic. At most, there are many settings conflicts with the beginning... When we arrived at the Dragon Palace, did we say hello? Ordinary snakes are always ten thousand feet, that is, starting at 30,000 meters, 30 kilometers, and what are the bigger ones, ten thousand feet snakes are at the level of small insects. Then why is the success rate of dragon transformation very low, very low, so many ancient warlocks have not succeeded, but those guys are still very powerful... Then the team came in, and all of them succeeded, and all of them were top dragon king species... Then he started playing matryoshka dolls again, showing off his IQ. He had tolerated this and that for many years, and then he suddenly became a clown. His IQ was online for a while, and not for a while. This IQ was online just to show that when he was cheated, the other person's IQ was more online, so the last one whose IQ was online was like being downgraded... To be honest, I have written this way of writing several times, and it only takes one or two chapters. However, starting from the fox at the beginning, to the Dragon Palace, this way of writing can easily conflict with many previous settings, and it seems to be deliberately misleading... If it is from the perspective of an ordinary native, there is no big problem in writing like this. After all, bosses appear one after another, but the protagonist is the designer at the beginning, and many logical settings cannot be overturned at will... For example, in ordinary novels, it can be attributed to the protagonist's knowledge problem, so the previous settings are overturned... But this protagonist is different. This protagonist is a designer. Once many settings are used, it is easy to overturn some of the previous settings in the later period for the so-called battle of wits and nesting dolls, and then temporarily patch them. However, the more patches are applied, the more bugs will appear... In the end, after reading more than 400 chapters, I kept nesting dolls. To be honest, I got a little tired of it.
Don't look at it, 8 women in 500 chapters are basically mindless hot stuff, the protagonist is weak as hell, and the rhythm can't keep up at all. It's better to start cultivating Qinglong, sign an agreement with demons and ghosts, and develop the underworld. After all, there are ready-made Xiang Yu and King Chu Jiang, which are much better than a few Shinto door gods. Also, 23 colleagues from TM group have passed through. The supporting characters are basically mentally retarded, and the protagonist has to rely on his first experience. You know, all the villains are online, their family members are very poisonous and negative, and there are bugs everywhere in the outline. There are so many demons that they sealed a door god and a mountain god, and the others are forgotten. There is also a fox who can't have children. Later, he slaps himself in the face and talks about double blood, nb. Later, the villain's strength jumps uncertainly. He can never beat the protagonist. Basically, you don't need to read it. If you read it, you need to see a doctor.
It started out well, but then it got really weird.
I really can't accept it anymore. The beginning is actually quite good. It needs to be logical and intelligent, and the description and plot advancement are all on the line. But what happened to what was written later? Being the Riddler on purpose. What did I say about the foreshadowing? Did you bury it like that? Oh my God, you almost said it clearly, but you just didn't say the last word. You could only reveal a little bit about your ambush, which is called an ambush. You said it clearly, which is basically the same as saying it clearly. But in the end, you didn't say anything. It's over. The most important thing is that there are many such cases. Just what is in the fog at sea? I won't write down how many chapters I'm dragging on. He keeps saying "That thing..." "How could it be..." "If that's what I think..." Please, brother, what kind of thing is it? There are also big and small blocking points, I won't go into details one by one. It made my mentality explode. Those of you who think you have a strong ability to accept it can take a look. I can't stand it anymore. My poison resistance is relatively low. Brothers, I will retreat first. Bye.
Speechless, why is the character's IQ in the full text sometimes online and sometimes offline?
The background setting is quite attractive But the description of the main character's sperm on the brain and the overall intelligence aura After Chapter 30, there are some prefaces that don't match the subtitles, which makes me feel confused. Later in the plot, the show begins In terms of character portrayal, I feel that if I don't know how to write female characters, I should write less or even not write them at all. I'd rather just use facial makeup. I feel like it's not likable. In short, the overall evaluation is that it is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. Finally, my personal doubts (If you have any good books, please recommend them. It's sad to see a shortage of books~)
The author must feel that he is very smart. The first chapter was okay, but after chapter 50 it was garbage.
The novel is very interesting. If you don't read it, you will regret it. Don't believe what the bad reviews say.
Posts for upgrading, welcome everyone, comment and like it
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Official(195)Scraped 20d ago
It's tasteless to eat, it's a pity to throw it away
It's uncomfortable to watch, but the setting is okay. The first part is really attractive. The first 30 chapters have some flaws, but they're not big, so they're acceptable. The last 30 chapters are about the emperor giving the princess a concubine (a cuckold was given to his son and daughter respectively). The princess is stupid, sweet and brainless (I feel like my IQ is so high at the age of five), and the concubine's mother-in-law. The mother flirts with the son-in-law (verbally cuckolding the emperor). I feel it is better not to arrange a scene where the princess has contact with the protagonist. The emperor inexplicably grants a marriage and brings a concubine. The other princesses and consorts are not as special as you. This is not to tell others that there is a problem. These two girls are also related to Cui. The writing is really unreasonable. I want to watch it but can't, it's so uncomfortable, I've given three stars as a compromise
I still don't understand what's the point of writing this about Chen Ying? ? ?
Forcibly make a writing point? This book of yours is based on online IQ flow. The groundwork is very good. Why did Chen Ying come in if you have to write something missing? It's really very vicious. Obviously the IQs of the protagonist and villain are all online. The characters are well drawn and their personalities are very distinctive. But Chen Ying had to be added. Has TM changed its writer? A Tiangang-level spell, just give it to me? How many times has the protagonist met her? Do you believe her that much? Even if she is a genius, if you want to win over someone, don't you check her first? It's really like forcefully adding a wife. . . . . .
After reading so many books, I have to complain about this one. After dozens of chapters, I am still an ordinary person. How can I be so powerful when I talk about Shintoism all day long? It is the same as the Western Holy See. Without faith, I am a useless person. I have a great power at the beginning and don't use it for my own profession. I have to choose a rubbish. It disgusts me.
...
Why does it feel like my strength goes up and down, all kinds of logic dolls, but in fact it conflicts with many of the previous settings... Write, write, write, are you happy? I watched it for a long time with the free ticket, and finally got to the Dragon Palace section... How should I put it, it feels like a matryoshka doll with a different skin, the kind that is forced into a nesting doll. One moment he is above the first level, another moment he is the first level, one moment he is not, the other is awesome, scary, very powerful, he can defeat him, he can't beat him, he can't beat him... Then he can crush the second best in the human race... But in fact, the first part is fine, and there is still a little bit of basic logic. At most, there are many settings conflicts with the beginning... When we arrived at the Dragon Palace, did we say hello? Ordinary snakes are always ten thousand feet, that is, starting at 30,000 meters, 30 kilometers, and what are the bigger ones, ten thousand feet snakes are at the level of small insects. Then why is the success rate of dragon transformation very low, very low, so many ancient warlocks have not succeeded, but those guys are still very powerful... Then the team came in, and all of them succeeded, and all of them were top dragon king species... Then he started playing matryoshka dolls again, showing off his IQ. He had tolerated this and that for many years, and then he suddenly became a clown. His IQ was online for a while, and not for a while. This IQ was online just to show that when he was cheated, the other person's IQ was more online, so the last one whose IQ was online was like being downgraded... To be honest, I have written this way of writing several times, and it only takes one or two chapters. However, starting from the fox at the beginning, to the Dragon Palace, this way of writing can easily conflict with many previous settings, and it seems to be deliberately misleading... If it is from the perspective of an ordinary native, there is no big problem in writing like this. After all, bosses appear one after another, but the protagonist is the designer at the beginning, and many logical settings cannot be overturned at will... For example, in ordinary novels, it can be attributed to the protagonist's knowledge problem, so the previous settings are overturned... But this protagonist is different. This protagonist is a designer. Once many settings are used, it is easy to overturn some of the previous settings in the later period for the so-called battle of wits and nesting dolls, and then temporarily patch them. However, the more patches are applied, the more bugs will appear... In the end, after reading more than 400 chapters, I kept nesting dolls. To be honest, I got a little tired of it.
Don't look at it, 8 women in 500 chapters are basically mindless hot stuff, the protagonist is weak as hell, and the rhythm can't keep up at all. It's better to start cultivating Qinglong, sign an agreement with demons and ghosts, and develop the underworld. After all, there are ready-made Xiang Yu and King Chu Jiang, which are much better than a few Shinto door gods. Also, 23 colleagues from TM group have passed through. The supporting characters are basically mentally retarded, and the protagonist has to rely on his first experience. You know, all the villains are online, their family members are very poisonous and negative, and there are bugs everywhere in the outline. There are so many demons that they sealed a door god and a mountain god, and the others are forgotten. There is also a fox who can't have children. Later, he slaps himself in the face and talks about double blood, nb. Later, the villain's strength jumps uncertainly. He can never beat the protagonist. Basically, you don't need to read it. If you read it, you need to see a doctor.
It started out well, but then it got really weird.
I really can't accept it anymore. The beginning is actually quite good. It needs to be logical and intelligent, and the description and plot advancement are all on the line. But what happened to what was written later? Being the Riddler on purpose. What did I say about the foreshadowing? Did you bury it like that? Oh my God, you almost said it clearly, but you just didn't say the last word. You could only reveal a little bit about your ambush, which is called an ambush. You said it clearly, which is basically the same as saying it clearly. But in the end, you didn't say anything. It's over. The most important thing is that there are many such cases. Just what is in the fog at sea? I won't write down how many chapters I'm dragging on. He keeps saying "That thing..." "How could it be..." "If that's what I think..." Please, brother, what kind of thing is it? There are also big and small blocking points, I won't go into details one by one. It made my mentality explode. Those of you who think you have a strong ability to accept it can take a look. I can't stand it anymore. My poison resistance is relatively low. Brothers, I will retreat first. Bye.
Speechless, why is the character's IQ in the full text sometimes online and sometimes offline?
The background setting is quite attractive But the description of the main character's sperm on the brain and the overall intelligence aura After Chapter 30, there are some prefaces that don't match the subtitles, which makes me feel confused. Later in the plot, the show begins In terms of character portrayal, I feel that if I don't know how to write female characters, I should write less or even not write them at all. I'd rather just use facial makeup. I feel like it's not likable. In short, the overall evaluation is that it is tasteless and it is a pity to discard it. Finally, my personal doubts (If you have any good books, please recommend them. It's sad to see a shortage of books~)
The author must feel that he is very smart. The first chapter was okay, but after chapter 50 it was garbage.
The novel is very interesting. If you don't read it, you will regret it. Don't believe what the bad reviews say.
Posts for upgrading, welcome everyone, comment and like it
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The reborn Chen Qing became a hard-working student in ancient times. After living in poverty for ten years, he finally got a title on the gold medal list. He thought that he would become a scholar from now on. Chen Qing, who married Bai Fumei and reached the pinnacle of his life, was suddenly involved in a strange fantasy event. It was also at that time that he discovered that this world was not simple. There were man-eating monsters, demons that bewitched people's hearts, and immortals who were said to be immortal but extremely weird! What makes him even more incredible is that... These deadly things seem to be... Designed by himself! ! !
The reborn Chen Qing became a hard-working student in ancient times. After ten years of poverty, he finally got a title on the gold medal list. He thought he would become a scholar, marry Bai Fumei and reach the peak of his life. However, Chen Qing was suddenly involved in a strange fantasy event. It was also at that time that he discovered that this world was not simple. There were man-eating monsters, demons that bewitched people's hearts, and immortals who were said to be immortal but extremely weird! What made him find it even more incredible was that... These deadly things, well... Were all designed by him himself!!!
. Planning to travel into the weird demon world of your own design, and advance the plot at a super fast pace. The male protagonist is a game monster designer. After time travel, he took part in the imperial examination and was involved in strange events. Only then did he realize that the world originated from the game he designed, and then he was involved in a strange plot. He was racing all the way, and the plot was fast-paced. The male protagonist is equivalent to a certain degree of information foretelling, and since it is a designed game, the various weirdnesses in the book, as well as the potential crises that should be left to the players to deal with, make this book very layered and have a sense of the overall situation. Of course, in my opinion, the real core point of this book is just one, which is the beauty of chaos when the rhythm of the plot is so fast, or the different beauty of order in the sharpness? It's a bit hard to explain exactly, but the plot advances at a super fast pace without seeming too messy, and it does feel gripping. At the same time, readers are dazzled, staring at the protagonist rushing through the plot, and they only care about the fun, and it is not easy to worry about the rationality of the plot logic. The main regret is that although the plot of this book is fast-paced and has a sense of fierceness, the protagonist actually relies on deus ex machina to solve the big crisis in the first act, rather than direct violence. There is a gap - fast-paced advancement is essentially tantamount to whet the appetite, making readers want to see how awesome the protagonist is and dares to advance the plot so quickly. However, deus ex machina somewhat destroys the aesthetic feeling.
I picked up a book called "Xiancao" and read it in one sitting. It's a group portrait, and many of the supporting characters are flesh-and-blood. If you like this type of book, it's a rare book "Xiancao"! The reborn Chen Qing became a hard-working student in ancient times. After living in poverty for ten years, he finally got a title on the gold medal list. He thought he would become a scholar from now on. Chen Qing, who married Bai Fumei and reached the pinnacle of his life, was suddenly involved in a strange fantasy event. It was also at that time that he discovered that this world was not simple. There were man-eating monsters, demons that bewitched people's hearts, and immortals who were said to be immortal but extremely weird! What makes him even more incredible is that... These deadly things seem... To have been designed by himself! ! !
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