Games with Fairies

Ink marks, a Qi Lianjing is still a Qi Lianjing at chapter 68. The character design of the protagonist is also a mess. You take over someone else's body, and the sister gives you money and clothes, and also brings you meals every day, often helps you wash clothes, and looks disgusted and reluctant. In the end, she is better than a stranger in your eyes. Even if you share a little bit of opportunity with your sister, it's okay. You look so stingy. The key is that you are not the original person. It is impossible for you to match the original person's personality. You don't like Ning Wan'er because you entered the Demon Training Sect. What about your character? Tsundere without being arrogant, free and easy without being free and easy enough. You can obviously be a normal person in the game, but can't you get along with your sister? Just leave your temper to your family and your gentleness to outsiders?

It's like this again. The protagonist's cheating can't keep up with the cheating of the sister beside him. What kind of brain-tanking novel did you write?

The further you get to the back, the less I can understand what you are writing.

I finished reading 700 chapters in one week and felt that the first few hundred chapters were pretty good, but the later chapters became more and more confusing and felt like they would be unfinished.

The previous writing was pretty good! Once you reach the 400th chapter, you no longer know what the author wants to do! I feel like the author has schizophrenia! After the 400th chapter, one second the protagonist still has to stay in the sect, and the next second he is writing a plot and arranging it! He exposes all kinds of things about himself to others at every turn! Then others can see through him at every turn! I have no idea what the author wants to write! It seems inexplicable, like schizophrenia

It started off well, but at most I didn't have a good choice of game rewards. When the Blood Lotus Sect came out, they started to use their wits to abuse their masters without thinking. I really can't understand the author's mind. If he can't write such a plot, why not write it? ? Wasted article, wasted time reading more than 100 chapters

This plot forced me to be trapped together with the female elder, and I was really speechless. Too damn forced The plot is too stupid, I can't stand it

I almost vomited when I saw the plot of Little Wild Grass. Originally, the incarnation and clones were a big poison, not to mention that the protagonist used someone else's body to develop a relationship with the heroine. This is not pure green!

The "system" is used to connect the whole book and advance the plot through different time periods. There are many places that leave suspense and make people want to read on. Ps: This writing style takes me back to when I was reading books in the past. At that time, it was through online novels that my writing skills improved significantly. Nowadays, some books feel that the writing style is too simple, which makes people have no desire to read.

I actually saw half of it, tsk tsk, tsk tsk tsk, a person who has no education, no good growing environment, has been locked in a cauldron with evil beasts since childhood, and is accompanied by a speechless soul. This kind of supporting character, after being liberated by the protagonist, you can write an unappetizing character. You are really a genius. How old is the relationship between brother-in-law and sister-in-law, wouldn't it be more correct to call the protagonist brother?