Beginning from the Sidelines and Becoming the Taoist Lord of Ten Thousand Dharmas

The plot lacks appeal. A Yuanying sect and a group of elders and seniors in the Qi training period. Is this appropriate? A little girl also told an elder that she heard that Senior Mo, who is at the seventh level of qi training, was going to accept the protagonist as his disciple. She asked the elder if the protagonist was very talented? I thought it was because these two people were of low level, but this little girl's elders told others that they were both from the Golden Core stage. And the Feng family foundation-building ancestor said that he would give the protagonist a great opportunity, which in turn would be 2 points of meritorious service! There is also Xuanyin Sect who mobilizes everyone to grab the treasure wine worm used in the Qi training period, and the effect of the wine worm is to spit out a pill after drinking, which is equivalent to the effect of a pill worth 10 spiritual stones used by monks in the Qi training period. It is said that after drinking the spirit wine, the wine bug may have an effect comparable to that of a pill worth 200 spirit stones. And the protagonist is rich but can't buy spiritual wine! Is this plot appropriate? And in this sect, the handyman disciples often bully and borrow (rob) spiritual stones, but no one cares about them. There are also small groups in the outer sect that bully and use merit points, but no one cares. How did this sect survive? Also, the protagonist accidentally picked up a foundation-level sword scripture. He was hiding it and was afraid that the sect boss would see it, so he didn't dare to use it in front of others. Is this a big deal? Generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style, but the plot is not. And the data is also a bit confusing. For example, it was written that Senior Sister Lin gave 30 merit points to the protagonist to help take care of the elixir field for half a year, and then the protagonist had merit points to change the method, but later it was written that she gave 10 merit points. The foundation-building monk asked the protagonist for help, but the reward for his time and effort was only two hundred spirit stones. However, when a group of outer sect disciples in the sect's Qi training period asked the protagonist to treat a plant, they were given dozens of spirit stones at the beginning, and even some merit points. Are these 9 outer disciples all second-generation immortals who don't regard spiritual stones as money? And what about Senior Sister Lin, who has a great reputation and extraordinary talent? When the protagonist first met, Senior Sister Lin was at the fifth level of qi training, and within two months she would apply to enter the inner sect (foundation building). Since cultivation is so fast, what did Senior Sister Lin do in the past? Or is it that Senior Sister Lin has only joined the sect a few months ago? So where does the reputation come from? Therefore, when the author wrote these plots, he didn't think much about it, he just followed the routine and made nonsense. There is also a plot when the protagonist kills a warrior for the first time. It is written that the protagonist has no attack spells and his system is the same as that of ordinary people. Then the protagonist uses lime powder + a few iron nails (without preparing weapons) to injure the martial arts master (who can unleash his energy) who is about to steal the protagonist, and then activates his sword power to kill the opponent. Could it be that the martial arts practiced by the opponent were fake? There are still many plots that cannot be explored in detail!

I originally felt that the writing was okay, and I wanted to read it as a mindless novel, but after writing 200 chapters of Qi Lianqi, there are still many poisonous points, and people can't help but want to complain. There has been a rebellion among the core disciples of the sect, so why don't you pay attention to the undercover issue? The Nascent Soul-level sect has a golden elixir undercover, can it be more ridiculous? There is also the issue of disciple loyalty. If there is no loyalty at all, what is the purpose of training the sect?

It's too poisonous. I haven't read the plot you filled in. This is 💩中💩. I explain your dream, Yidegrami. I haven't read a novel that makes me feel extremely aggrieved for so long. Pure**

One chapter a day in the world of cultivating immortals In the world of cultivating immortals, retreats are calculated on a yearly basis. You know how to write books, and you are the best in the world in word count. People who don't have a system can only build a foundation in a hundred days at most. You, a systematic person, can't build a foundation in a hundred days. You can start in at least 200 days. Do you know how to attract readers? Your 100-day foundation building is not different from what we understand, is it? Yours is not 999 days, so if you build a foundation with more than 200, you feel that it is fast. By the foundation building period, you will not have to write hundreds of thousands of chapters, right? [Emot=default,80/]

Selling dog meat with a sheep's head. You promised to practice heresy, but in the end, you become an immortal in the traditional way. The heresy is opportunistic and you become an immortal through bugs. This is the authentic way of writing heresy. There is no heresy from the beginning to the end of this book.

I can't say it's poisonous, I can only say it has no bright spots. Even after one or two levels of Qi training, I can't even lift a 200-pound object. It can be lifted with the blessing of internal strength in martial arts. After the skills in the Goldfinger panel reach full level, they can only be replaced by his higher-level skills. This directly locks the upper limit of the skill. And only by upgrading the level of the cheat panel can there be free skill slots. Suppress development space. From being a heretic to becoming a Taoist Master, I haven't seen any of his performance in this regard. The sect must contribute from top to bottom, from cultivation resources to cultivation techniques to spells. Are you a company or a sect? Companies all know that they need to use benefits to maintain relationships. No wonder such a large sect has undercover agents from top to bottom. No wonder there are traitors. A platform for practice. It is inevitable that this sect will develop from its peak to its demise. From the beginning of the development of the protagonist, I thought it was Gou Daowen. As a result, you said that this was an offline fight. Running outside all day long. If nothing happens to you, who will? It's no wonder he was threatened. From a demonic witch to a rich woman starving for food, she was trained like a dog. It's just that I didn't train thoroughly. I promised to take care of the spiritual field, but today I went on a mission. You have never used the freezing spell you redeemed in the early stage. It's better to save money and practice immortality skills in exchange. A fully-leveled Little Spiritual Rain Technique only provides 49 points, which might as well be exchanged for advanced points. Alchemy is just a powerful pill. Even with great strength, it can be infinitely improved. Do you think you are the golden elixir for the creation of heaven and earth? Other people's golden elixirs are one-turn, two-turn, three-turn, but your Dali Pill is ordinary, high-quality, and perfect. The book is full of flaws, so I won't go into details. You are truly a "fairy" and a "hero".

Your combat power design is really rubbish, and the plot is a mess. You can't even carry 400 pounds at the second level of your Qi training. How powerful can that iron Qi training at the third level be? You just let him drive you around like a dog.

I've read a hundred chapters and it's okay. I don't have anything to complain about. It's a common problem in novels about cultivating immortals. The sect's binding force is not enough, and there are always white-eyed wolves who want to be traitors.

This book should have been changed. There are all kinds of crazy operations, killing people and yelling, and then there is something burning, power, really vomiting blood🤮

The writing after Chapter 130 is a bit messy. For example, Senior Sister Lin has forgotten the foundation-building pill and acquired impeccable spirit body. I hope the author can fix the loopholes.