
Palm Fairy Garden
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His soul traveled through the world of immortality, and he awakened the golden finger that was enhanced with points, but... Su Ming's golden finger was used to add points to the magic weapon. "I, Su Ming, will never be a boy who gives away treasures!" Su Ming looked at the mini fairy palace in the palm of his hand, his eyes focused, "Strengthen it for me!" The golden light of the fairy palace flashed, and then bursts of fairy music...
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Official(147)Scraped 10d ago
Is this score targeted by the author?
It was still 6.5 Before, but now it has dropped again. I don't know who is jealous.
Why is it like this again?
Can't you tell anyone apart? Where does the hatred come from? You are not the original owner, you are just a time-traveler who has been reborn. You said that there is nothing wrong with you being kind-hearted and helping the original owner to avenge you, but you were just provoked by others and scolded the original owner's father. Why are you, a time traveler, joining in the fun? How can you not control your violent emotions? What a filial son you are. I have also read a book that is even more disgusting. The original owner died after the engagement was broken off. The protagonist traveled back in time and was reborn. Then he felt so bitter and resentful that he was the one who got the breakup. Then he wiped out his fiancée's family and arrested her and tied her up in various ways. This is pure BT psychosis. This one is almost there.
The low scores make sense.
After my father died, I didn't rush to take revenge, saying I didn't have the strength. I don't feel anything when someone dies in real life. The protagonist catches up with him as soon as his eyes turn red.
Author, did you delete the comment? six six
The author deleted my comment. I was convinced and I typed a few hundred words for you, but you couldn't read it, right? Just delete my comment directly. Let me tell you that, the latest dozen or so chapters are illogical, although I know that the author is laying the groundwork for the subsequent protagonist with pieces of wood (to put it bluntly, he is both a bitch and a memorial arch). 1. When the Lord of the Holy Land needs the protagonist to seduce the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint, he kills him without hesitation, and then there is the plot that follows. 2. The current protagonist of the enemy directly chooses one versus two, and there is even the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint who is stronger than him. 3. It took several months to understand the rules, but when he started working with the Saint of Ten Thousand Hearts, the protagonist could break through in half an hour. 4. From the early stage of Nascent Soul to the early stage of divine transformation, people can still be captured alive. The logic doesn't make sense. The protagonist can't compare in terms of understanding of laws, nor can he compare with his cultivation. Even Wanxinsheng is reincarnated from the upper world. The only thing the protagonist can rely on is the Hall of Immortals and the Sword of Law. One is an invincible god for defense and the other is an invincible god for attack. But what about speed? I can't beat an Avatar and still can't run away? 5. The previous hundreds of chapters have emphasized the need to hide the golden finger, and directly expose it when fighting the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint. So the general question is whether the author has been written by someone else?
Delete comments and then delete them
Don't you like deleting comments and banning people? Come on, I post comments every day and delete them if I can. Why don't people comment on it if it's not logical?
The writing is okay and the logic is basically smooth. But the plot is a bit puzzling. The protagonist risked being exposed to refine a second-level magic weapon to make money in exchange for a foundation-building pill, in order to trade for a paper puppet technique in the Qi training period. This foundation building is too worthless. According to the price of 30,000 yuan for the Foundation Establishment Pill, this paper puppet technique can be sold for a few thousand spirit stones at most. Even if it's more, it's not worth 30,000. A 10-year-old girl is in love, and she is still in the world of immortality. This makes people speechless. The rice shop owner is dead, and it is unreasonable for a mortal wife to be killed by a woman. The yang source of a cultivator is very important and is generally not wasted on mortals. Even if you become an immortal and settle down, it is still very easy to marry a beautiful mortal woman. There is no need to do so. It is impossible for the enemy to be so mad that a man who sells rice at a low price has any life-or-death hatred. The reason why their mother and son may have died was because the Zhang family was eradicated (it is unlikely, after all, they cannot cultivate immortality). Or some evil cultivators who were passing by did it casually (picking yin to replenish yang was not possible, they could only pick yang to replenish yin), and the ghost soul was extracted. There is another possibility that it was eaten by a monster. This is the biggest possibility. The protagonist sees the death of a mother and son, hears a fight, and goes to watch. This is unreasonable. When his father died, he didn't even confiscate the body. Instead, he had to stand up for unrelated neighbors. And the cautious old man Gong also agreed, which was unreasonable. If the protagonist has a paper puppet, it would be wrong to feel confident. Later, it is shown that he is not sure about the combat power of the paper puppet, and at the same time he does not want to be exposed. So he is still a rookie in the middle stage of Qi training. According to the character described above, such behavior should not be performed. Summary: Once a character's personality is set, it cannot be changed casually, not even by the author. If you want to change your personality, you can only achieve it through the influence of events, or the growth of your cultivation experience.
The protagonist is schizophrenic!
In just a few dozen chapters, the psychological experience ranges from indifferent (a person who does not want to take revenge after his father dies) to an overwhelming sense of justice (putting himself in danger for a conflicted mother and son, but not killing anyone afterwards) to reckless (carefully using gold hands to make money) to reckless (for the fourth level of Qi training for a Qi training spell, he directly exchanged a second-level magic weapon for a foundation pill)
The city god and the incense became extremely poisonous, and Shen Nong was poisoned to death.
It was okay at first, but when I started to isolate the incense, it became really poisonous! ! ! Also, the soul-callers handled the situation very well in the beginning. They secretly recruited some elite mortal souls and they were very spiritual. But later on, they went to the City God's Temple with great fanfare and even knelt down to worship incense. It completely deteriorated.
Really ink stains
I have been spending money to read this book. I used to think it was well worth the money, but until you updated it every day, and at 12 o'clock, I felt that your writing level had plummeted. Until now, even though I don't like to comment, I can't help but want to scold you. Can you stop being so low on word count? You want to make money and be lazy at the same time. You are so awesome! ! !
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Official(147)Scraped 10d ago
Is this score targeted by the author?
It was still 6.5 Before, but now it has dropped again. I don't know who is jealous.
Why is it like this again?
Can't you tell anyone apart? Where does the hatred come from? You are not the original owner, you are just a time-traveler who has been reborn. You said that there is nothing wrong with you being kind-hearted and helping the original owner to avenge you, but you were just provoked by others and scolded the original owner's father. Why are you, a time traveler, joining in the fun? How can you not control your violent emotions? What a filial son you are. I have also read a book that is even more disgusting. The original owner died after the engagement was broken off. The protagonist traveled back in time and was reborn. Then he felt so bitter and resentful that he was the one who got the breakup. Then he wiped out his fiancée's family and arrested her and tied her up in various ways. This is pure BT psychosis. This one is almost there.
The low scores make sense.
After my father died, I didn't rush to take revenge, saying I didn't have the strength. I don't feel anything when someone dies in real life. The protagonist catches up with him as soon as his eyes turn red.
Author, did you delete the comment? six six
The author deleted my comment. I was convinced and I typed a few hundred words for you, but you couldn't read it, right? Just delete my comment directly. Let me tell you that, the latest dozen or so chapters are illogical, although I know that the author is laying the groundwork for the subsequent protagonist with pieces of wood (to put it bluntly, he is both a bitch and a memorial arch). 1. When the Lord of the Holy Land needs the protagonist to seduce the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint, he kills him without hesitation, and then there is the plot that follows. 2. The current protagonist of the enemy directly chooses one versus two, and there is even the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint who is stronger than him. 3. It took several months to understand the rules, but when he started working with the Saint of Ten Thousand Hearts, the protagonist could break through in half an hour. 4. From the early stage of Nascent Soul to the early stage of divine transformation, people can still be captured alive. The logic doesn't make sense. The protagonist can't compare in terms of understanding of laws, nor can he compare with his cultivation. Even Wanxinsheng is reincarnated from the upper world. The only thing the protagonist can rely on is the Hall of Immortals and the Sword of Law. One is an invincible god for defense and the other is an invincible god for attack. But what about speed? I can't beat an Avatar and still can't run away? 5. The previous hundreds of chapters have emphasized the need to hide the golden finger, and directly expose it when fighting the Ten Thousand Hearts Saint. So the general question is whether the author has been written by someone else?
Delete comments and then delete them
Don't you like deleting comments and banning people? Come on, I post comments every day and delete them if I can. Why don't people comment on it if it's not logical?
The writing is okay and the logic is basically smooth. But the plot is a bit puzzling. The protagonist risked being exposed to refine a second-level magic weapon to make money in exchange for a foundation-building pill, in order to trade for a paper puppet technique in the Qi training period. This foundation building is too worthless. According to the price of 30,000 yuan for the Foundation Establishment Pill, this paper puppet technique can be sold for a few thousand spirit stones at most. Even if it's more, it's not worth 30,000. A 10-year-old girl is in love, and she is still in the world of immortality. This makes people speechless. The rice shop owner is dead, and it is unreasonable for a mortal wife to be killed by a woman. The yang source of a cultivator is very important and is generally not wasted on mortals. Even if you become an immortal and settle down, it is still very easy to marry a beautiful mortal woman. There is no need to do so. It is impossible for the enemy to be so mad that a man who sells rice at a low price has any life-or-death hatred. The reason why their mother and son may have died was because the Zhang family was eradicated (it is unlikely, after all, they cannot cultivate immortality). Or some evil cultivators who were passing by did it casually (picking yin to replenish yang was not possible, they could only pick yang to replenish yin), and the ghost soul was extracted. There is another possibility that it was eaten by a monster. This is the biggest possibility. The protagonist sees the death of a mother and son, hears a fight, and goes to watch. This is unreasonable. When his father died, he didn't even confiscate the body. Instead, he had to stand up for unrelated neighbors. And the cautious old man Gong also agreed, which was unreasonable. If the protagonist has a paper puppet, it would be wrong to feel confident. Later, it is shown that he is not sure about the combat power of the paper puppet, and at the same time he does not want to be exposed. So he is still a rookie in the middle stage of Qi training. According to the character described above, such behavior should not be performed. Summary: Once a character's personality is set, it cannot be changed casually, not even by the author. If you want to change your personality, you can only achieve it through the influence of events, or the growth of your cultivation experience.
The protagonist is schizophrenic!
In just a few dozen chapters, the psychological experience ranges from indifferent (a person who does not want to take revenge after his father dies) to an overwhelming sense of justice (putting himself in danger for a conflicted mother and son, but not killing anyone afterwards) to reckless (carefully using gold hands to make money) to reckless (for the fourth level of Qi training for a Qi training spell, he directly exchanged a second-level magic weapon for a foundation pill)
The city god and the incense became extremely poisonous, and Shen Nong was poisoned to death.
It was okay at first, but when I started to isolate the incense, it became really poisonous! ! ! Also, the soul-callers handled the situation very well in the beginning. They secretly recruited some elite mortal souls and they were very spiritual. But later on, they went to the City God's Temple with great fanfare and even knelt down to worship incense. It completely deteriorated.
Really ink stains
I have been spending money to read this book. I used to think it was well worth the money, but until you updated it every day, and at 12 o'clock, I felt that your writing level had plummeted. Until now, even though I don't like to comment, I can't help but want to scold you. Can you stop being so low on word count? You want to make money and be lazy at the same time. You are so awesome! ! !
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Abandon books Gold Finger: Strengthening Magic Weapon Girlfriend: How much? But there is no definite The protagonist travels through the world of immortality, and the whole world reaches the level of becoming a god. He is blocked by alien beasts and has no way to ascend. The protagonist can upgrade magic weapons, rely on puppets to do things, and hide behind himself. I generally don't like this kind of behind-the-scenes drama, but I actually couldn't finish reading this book. It gave me the impression that it was a relatively peaceful novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist rarely got bullied and was not too violent. Although he also ransacked homes and destroyed families, there was not much detail about it. The pretentiousness and slaps are not particularly intensive, or it can be said that the senses are scattered because of the puppets. After reading Chapter 309, I can feel that the plot in the following dozens of chapters is accelerating rapidly. From the golden elixir to the Yuanying, and from the Yuanying to the battle power of the transformed god, it all passed in a flash. I don't know if it will collapse, but it looks cool. Unfortunately, the stock was gone and I was too lazy to wait, so I gave up the book.




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It's a new book. It looks good. I can imagine it will be more enjoyable later on. I have always read that there are more people cultivating immortals and elixirs and less people refining weapons. This book is considered to be a weapon refiner and should be more comfortable.




At first glance, you may think that this is an ordinary book about cultivating immortals, but if you read it calmly, you will soon have a feeling of "well, it's okay." Recommended!













