My Lady, Hear Me Out. What Happened with the Saintess Was an Accident

Only a true food connoisseur could keep watching. It's a classic villain who stares at beautiful women with hatred in his eyes. The beginning says the male lead exudes an ethereal aura, which ordinary people can sense, but the female lead and the villain don't. I can't believe this classic trope still exists in 2025!

The author just needs to keep writing male protagonist stories; negative reviews are normal. That's just the current trend at Pineapple Bun. Hopefully, the author's writing will improve, since male protagonist stories are becoming increasingly rare.

The author's writing is good, the ideas are fresh, and the reading experience is excellent. If they persist, it will surely become a masterpiece. I hope the author can persevere. I'm following along.

Speechless. Are you a primary school student? What kind of rubbish is this? The Demon Lord seems to have intellectual disabilities.

I'll just briefly point out two problems: 1. Too many tired tropes are used haphazardly, without any real connection, resulting in a poor reading experience; 2. The formula is too outdated. The "alternate identities" trope is from years ago. While some might enjoy it, the constant use of alternate identities often leads to characters becoming less intelligent, slows down the plot, and the clichéd storyline means it's destined to be short-lived.

Wow, Xu Xu even won an award!

The transitions are abrupt and lack smoothness; it's as if the outline was slightly polished and directly copied and pasted. The reasons for the characters' attitude changes are insufficient. First, consider these most difficult and fundamental issues. And one more thing, wasn't it edited?

The pacing is too fast. There were many opportunities to depict the male and female leads' adjustment and how their relationship developed, but none of these details were provided. Instead, it's simply stated in a few sentences that their relationship progressed in just a few days, missing many crucial developmental moments. These potentially engaging plot points were wasted. Later, seeing the guard captain's hammer blown off, yet still acting like the male lead lacked any real skill and was attracted to beauty, was a major turn-off. The character lacked logic. While it's possible to show him provoking the male lead, the motivation should have been carefully developed, and not simply attributed to beauty...

The writing is a bit poor, and the clichéd plot points are awkwardly interspersed. However, since the author has fans supporting them, they shouldn't be self-deprecating. Some people's online behavior is indeed lacking and can be very discouraging. But as long as the author persists, they can still create good works.

It's weird. The fake couple acts like they're really together. The male lead does things to make Jiang Liyan "jealous," and then she acts like a yandere. The male lead also tacitly accepts this "henpecked" behavior. I mean, if I didn't know it was a fake couple, I would have thought Jiang Liyan knew the male lead's identity was Bai Yuan.