Reincarnated as an Evil Princess, Yet Became the Moonlight of His Heart?

It felt somewhat frustrating to watch; it was like the protagonist was playing dumb to outwit the enemy, but he was always the one playing dumb. It's strange that people with a bit of power and influence would betray their masters during an imperial civil war. They only had 100,000 troops, yet they dared to attack the capital. Even if the army were intact, they couldn't have held the capital, let alone suffered casualties. Furthermore, the royal family's control seemed too weak, while the lords' control was very strong; I've never seen generals betray their lords before.

This is my first time writing a book review! Mengmeng's writing isn't very good! Well, let's just say that Qingqing's yuri writing is excellent. After all, she's writing out of passion, and such young authors are rare! Everyone should cherish her! Having read her work since "Little Cat Girl," I deeply understand Qingqing's perspective. There's sweetness and angst, but mostly a lingering sweetness. I believe her new work will definitely have even more originality; Qingqing's ideas are always quite fresh! It makes me want to try yuri myself! Hmm, I've said so much without realizing it. Anyway, I'll always support Qingqing!

Wow, the book I started reading four years ago is still being updated! I love you, meow!

It's very well-written and engaging; a satisfying read in one go. However, the author seems a bit paranoid, needing to explain everything they write, probably suffering from PTSD from being tormented by trolls. The main characters are well-developed so far, and hopefully this will hold even with more characters. The plot shows the author put a lot of thought into it; it flows smoothly without any abrupt jumps. There are many characters, but it's not chaotic; each character is doing their own thing, making for a pleasant reading experience without feeling intellectually challenged. The later war scenes are quite extensive, and the narrative pacing and logic remain intact, which is truly commendable. So far...

I really love the world Qingqing created. I've thought about this for a long time and feel it's necessary to say it. Because I love the world Qingqing created, I hope she can follow her own ideas more. Qingqing is still a bit too soft-hearted. Others' thoughts on this world can only be suggestions and opinions, not demands. Suggestions are meant to be offered, not demands. In areas where there are no problems, don't make excessive changes to the book just because a few readers feel you're writing for their benefit. The characters' personalities are Qingqing's ideal, and shouldn't be altered based on the opinions of those kinds of people...

Most novels these days are trending towards the "feel-good" genre, with clichéd plots and particularly poorly written romance. I once followed a book that initially had a great plot, well-developed characters, and even well-developed NPCs, but ultimately turned into a mindless wish-fulfillment story. This book, however, is one of the few I found worthwhile after starting with a newbie. I hope the author can keep it up. The protagonist's personality is well-written, but the two female leads don't seem to have any distinct personalities yet; hopefully, they'll become more defined later. In short, stick to your own vision; after all, it's your own book.

After reading a dozen or so chapters, it feels so much like a female-oriented novel. There are even face-slapping scenes; it feels like I've traveled back ten years.

It's a great read. I started reading it around September and read it on and off until now. There was a part in the middle that focused entirely on side stories, and I almost gave up. I came here to see a wicked princess conquer the world, and I really wasn't interested in a bunch of side stories. But after that part, the author changed the writing style, and it became very enjoyable to read. I kept following it until the latest chapter.

The first book I subscribed to in its entirety was alright at the beginning, but after subscribing, the writing became overly detailed. It felt like the author wanted to write about everything. The blacksmith section in the second volume, starting from chapter 130, went on to chapter 200, with many easily omitted parts described in detail. To be honest, it was very padded. I don't know the purpose of writing about that blacksmith. The development of the twins was a bit simplistic; the older sister was killed off in less than a day, too quickly. The descriptions of daily life were painful, and the harem romance was glossed over, with the focus entirely on developing the plot. The author also liked to presumptuously end chapters without any hints, leaving the reader to guess. It's okay occasionally...

I think it's very well written, from the foreshadowing to the psychological descriptions of the characters. The only thing that's not quite captivating... I think it's the current environment. The mainstream is all about slice-of-life yuri stories or stories about characters living a carefree, harem-building life. There are also many good books like yours that haven't been featured yet. Maybe if you had written it a year earlier, it would have been much more successful. If I had to point out anything not quite right... Maybe it's not erotic enough. Sigh, just look at the books on the recommendation lists... It's really frustrating, but you really write very well!! Keep it up!! I'll support you.