The Passerby Junior Sister Is Actually the Big Boss Behind the Scenes

Who is this Gu Sinian to your author? He's just a lecherous extra who's eyeing the female lead. Writing about him once or twice is one thing, but describing him repeatedly with such lengthy descriptions—what are you trying to do? 😓

The book is riddled with typos; all the pills are mistakenly labeled as ammunition, indicating it's never been proofread. Each chapter includes a repetitive summary of over a hundred words, making it too repetitive and unpleasant to read. The author's attitude is unprofessional and they're clearly trying to fool the reader. I do not recommend reading it.

The other female leads also didn't seem to have any romantic feelings. The impression I got from everyone was that they only wanted a physical relationship with the male lead and didn't love him at all. And the male lead was completely kept in the dark by them. He was diligent in trying to make money and handle crises. But in the female lead's eyes, he was performing like a clown. I really feel sorry for the male lead. The author is truly amazing for managing to portray a group of women like this; it turns a harem anime into something resembling a clown anime.

I've read about two-thirds of it, and all I can say is that the pacing is incredibly slow. It uses the same old background trope as the cannon fodder junior sister, but the core is just a non-ascension version of Tiancan Tudou's writing style. And the power levels are dropping way too fast! The female leads are all about the same age as the male leads; in the parts I've read, the male lead is at Foundation Establishment stage, and the female lead is already fighting against Nascent Soul stage cultivators.

What's most infuriating is In the current chapters, it seems that all the female characters are cultivating in order to suppress the male protagonist. Don't tell me it's to toughen up the male lead. You don't participate in the entire boss fight storyline. You only came out at the very end and used intimidation to subdue him. Then I watched the male lead come back and hug me. I don't think I'm watching the male lead; I'm watching his pet being played with however he wants, since it's already outside his control.

"" Is not "" (tea poison); "" is a term used to describe a woman's hairpin, while the male protagonist is said to be "" (coming of age); "" is not "" (elbow control). Before you use these terms, can you at least look them up to make yourself look literate?

The later chapters involved numerous deletions, often with repetitive and filler text, which was very disjointed and negatively impacted the reading experience. The author consistently noted in the middle of the story that deleted chapters wouldn't affect the plot, but almost all key plot points were removed, leaving the story disjointed and frustrating. If this is a concern, I don't recommend starting the series.

This is truly deceiving one's master and bewitching one's ancestors! He's only a teenager, yet he's already...

There's too much unnecessary rambling, and it's unnecessary to explain the settings and such extensively in the main text.

The male lead's presence in the beginning was so weak, almost indistinguishable from a background character, that very few people had the patience to continue watching. Then, a friend mentioned something frustrating, so I skipped to the later parts of the series. The character Gu Yansheng was poorly developed, and most of the later plot revolved around her. She seemed like a female lead who gained popularity by being taken advantage of by men, and her actions weren't given any reasonable explanation.