The Pitiful Girl Picked Up by a Sweetheart Turned Out to Be a Vicious, Cruel Beauty

If you're going to write a pure romance, then write a pure romance. But why give the female lead a special condition where every character clings to her, only to be kicked away by her, and then portray her as incredibly pure by belittling the other characters? How disgusting! It's one thing if one superhuman falls for the female lead at the beginning—it's for plot reasons, but then all those female superhumans after Bull Demon King are like brainless idiots, clinging to her only to be kicked away and left as losers. 😅 The beginning was pretty good, but it got worse and worse as it went on.

Fu Ruo's murder was a mistake.

No, the ending of the last book was way too rushed! After raising it for so long, this is it? There are so many plot holes that haven't been filled yet!

The main storyline is about to fall apart. You don't want to replicate the whole big story from the previous book and give me another bad ending, do you?

I'm not a professional book reviewer, just someone who feels compelled to share my thoughts on books I enjoy. This book has a rather slow pace, with the main plot unfolding gradually while the world-building is developed through the protagonist's witty remarks. Personally, I prefer books with a more measured pace, where important events are explained in detail. If the pace is too fast, it feels like a mere diary entry, quickly skimmed over and not very engaging. I'm curious how the protagonist will become stronger later on, or even if they will become stronger at all. I believe they should develop abilities, though it ultimately depends on the author's intentions. I hope for more updates; otherwise, I'll have to let the book rest for a while.

I feel like the female lead's constitution only allows for harem stories; pure romance is too painful and can't bring happiness to everyone.

Chapter 28 is a replacement chapter; you need to refresh the page.

The pacing is really slow! The beginning was quite good, but the author seems to have lost control of the rhythm later on. Although it's supposed to be a 1v1 relationship, it feels more like a harem story. After Ye developed her ability to soothe others, she should have gotten down to business, but then she stopped. Now she's treating Coconut Juice like a pet, and it's hard to imagine her getting down to business without feeling awkward.

Let it rest a bit longer. Hopefully, next time I think of this book, I can read a hundred or so chapters directly, fast-forwarding to the part where the little girl gets brutally beaten by the mature woman. I hope someone will kick me when that chapter comes out.

Isn't this just a complete disaster? It never explained why the system was so fixated on Gu. Later in the story, the system simply abandoned all the foreshadowing, and the so-called savior was never mentioned again. Did you really just write whatever came to mind without an outline?