I Really Don't Want to Become a Winner in Life in the Apocalypse

I originally planned to finish reading before commenting, but I couldn't continue after reading halfway through, so I'll just talk about the problems with this book so far. It's a typical "overpowered protagonist" novel, a typical "cool" story. It's all about enjoyment, and it's okay to read without thinking. However, if you look closely, you'll find that the author seems like a child. The settings in the first few chapters feel like a joke, completely disregarding the book's premise. The most obvious example is the level system. It's one thing for the male lead to have a level seven rare treasure, but what about the others? Why do they level up so quickly? The apocalypse has only just begun; how long could it have been? Level one crystals are already everywhere? And rare treasures? How come rare treasures are already everywhere at the very beginning of the apocalypse...?

Writing this book was purely accidental. However, in the early stages, many lovely readers encouraged me, which made me very happy and motivated me to continue writing. I hope it will continue to be so, and that I won't forget the joy I felt when I first started writing. (As for opinions on this book, I can only say that everyone has different tastes. If my writing doesn't meet expectations, I can only apologize.) PS: I'm already aware that the logic and settings aren't very smooth, haha. I'll carefully refine the settings in my next book to avoid making the same mistakes. I will read all opinions on this book, whether they are criticisms or comments...

First of all, the subject matter is very novel; it's been a long time since I've seen a book with a post-apocalyptic theme, so I initially had high expectations for this book. However, I couldn't continue reading after halfway through—the logical flaws are just too numerous! The characters' emotions are also poorly written, full of points to criticize. How did you manage to write something like this? Although it's a post-apocalyptic story, could you please at least use some normal adult logic in your writing? Think about whether your writing is logical and reasonable. Exaggerating a bit, almost every chapter you've written so far has something to criticize...

Um, 8 (gesturing with fingers to indicate an eight) What? Eight million? Eighty million! Then, without a word, he swiped his card and bought it. A little girl's father's card can be used to casually spend 80 million. And the protagonist has tens of thousands in savings. I'm guessing the author of this story isn't very old, or maybe the protagonist lives in Zimbabwe? Okay, even if the protagonist is a rich second-generation, the kind who can easily pull out 80 million. He was planning to rob someone in the first place? And he even said he couldn't tell anyone because they'd think he was mentally ill. Dude, what's the point of your superpower? Your dad can casually pull out 80 million, but he doesn't have any brains? Open your eyes...

The initial apocalyptic setting wasn't particularly noteworthy, but after reading further, I felt it didn't feel like a typical post-apocalyptic novel. The abilities of the characters were far too powerful; honestly, it felt more like watching a protagonist cultivate immortality in a post-apocalyptic world, leveling up by defeating monsters. Also, the author's writing style felt mediocre; the tension wasn't effectively conveyed, making it difficult to immerse the reader and resulting in a rather uninteresting read. It failed to deliver the atmosphere a post-apocalyptic novel should have. I hope they address this in the future. This is just my personal opinion; please don't be too harsh. I've only read a few dozen chapters and don't intend to continue, so my views may be biased. Thank you.

I'm going all in, taking many authors' first time. This novel is a sister-complex story. The author probably doesn't realize it, but I can tell; the author is a sister-complex. I predict the main heroine will definitely be the younger sister. The male lead's transformation is unbearable, but I'm still enduring it. Isn't there ever a girl the male lead can fall for?! Does the younger sister always have to be the main heroine?! I scream! This novel shouldn't be too angsty, because if it develops normally, it'll be an invincible protagonist story.

The writing style is too immature; even basic logic is inconsistent. This is a practice piece by a novice author.

The book was alright in the beginning. However, the younger sister's psychological state was somewhat poorly portrayed. The adaptation to the apocalypse was too rapid. While the protagonist had some doubts, the story didn't seem to convey a desire to understand them. It was mostly just daily life of killing monsters, rescuing people, and encountering new monsters. Then came the sudden, overwhelming amount of information: ancient-style women, a saintly younger sister, and precognitive information about the future—it was overwhelming. The precognitive ability itself was also a flaw; it left too many unanswered questions, making the reader feel uneasy, like, "Wait, will this happen later?" Furthermore, the precognitions were always set far in the future, not in the immediate future, leaving much to the reader's imagination...

Is the author a middle school or high school student? It reads like an essay. Being diligent is good, but you need to think things through before writing. A post-apocalyptic protagonist, supposedly a seasoned survivor of ten years, how can he have survived for ten years in the apocalypse? It's too naive. The protagonist reminds me of those male supporting characters in post-apocalyptic novels who don't even last 15 chapters. The writing is okay, but the ideas are too immature. Take the "returning from the apocalypse after ten years" part, for example; it's mentioned at least ten times. What seasoned apocalyptic survivor would think about that every day? It's in almost every chapter; every few chapters, the protagonist mentions it. I hope the author doesn't rush to write whatever comes to mind...

Honestly, I wanted to give up before even reaching chapter 50. Don't tell me I didn't read the later chapters; the earlier ones were enough to discourage me. While some say novels are just for fun, that's only true for those who haven't experienced or learned about the apocalypse. The protagonist survived ten years in the apocalypse and just barely made ends meet? What kind of muscle can you build in seven days? You wouldn't even survive the fatigue period; wouldn't you just be courting death in the apocalypse? It's normal for the protagonist to be a reborn person and know many secrets of the apocalypse, but what about the others? Are they all so oblivious? Shouldn't they be filled with fear of the unknown? How can they act like they've been in the apocalypse for over a decade after only a few days? Author...