The Demon Princess Has to Keep Trying to Survive Today, Too

I'll try my best to finish it this Saturday. Please understand.

Some people like angst-filled stories, some like sweet ones; it's all a matter of personal taste. Why be so arrogant when you're offering them for free?

One of my roommates had some trouble tonight, so I won't be updating. I'm currently helping the teacher take her home.

The new book was taken down for violating regulations. I'll handle it as I see how it goes; the problem is difficult to fix and will affect the entire book.

The early part of the story was quite well-written, with beautiful prose, a coherent plot, and well-placed angst. The first death of the female lead left a lingering sense of unease, but it was perfectly timed, and the overall setup was excellent. However, the plot started to lose its momentum in the second life. Both the coherence and the foreshadowing declined. It seems the author was busy with other things in real life, which could explain the decline in their writing. Furthermore, the protagonist's character was overly weak and pathetic; to put it bluntly, he didn't seem like a normal person. A normal person tormented like this would have gone insane long ago, their personality would have been twisted, and the constant torture would have been mentally damaging...

My assessment of the first volume is that the deaths were too easy, and the characters even had someone to accompany them, making them seem less tragic. The deaths weren't painful enough. Also, the protagonist should be completely replaced in the second volume. Don't make them seem like they're dead but not quite. You can let the protagonist occasionally recall fragments of their past life, but don't have them directly transmigrate. If they die, make it clear. For the second volume, I hope the author maintains the intensity. Those who finished the first volume aren't here for sweetness; they're here for the angst. Sweetness is fine, but less is more; the more angst, the better. As for other minor details like secret realms and fortuitous encounters, please omit them if possible. Just gloss over anything unrelated to the main plot. That's not what people are here for. In short, I hope the author maintains the intensity in the second volume...

I'm really afraid the protagonist will come out of the book and kill you, author.

A tribute to the revival race of the new generation of legendary pigeon-dropping king

Do any of you in the comments section have similar stories of torture and abuse? Looking for more.

Although this is my first time writing a book review, I'm a seasoned bookworm. So far, the author's writing is excellent, and the emotions are very well portrayed. However, I still feel the plot jumps around a bit, and the protagonist's romantic subplot seems a little illogical. But you can see that the characters are also experiencing emotions; it's a good story with bittersweet moments. The author's emotions are very immersive. Anyway, keep it up, author! I hope the author can persevere and keep writing about their every move!