Reborn After Betrayal, the Frail True Heiress Gives Up

October is really coming to an end. New readers can rest assured and subscribe now, as you can see from my serious expression. September is almost over, and October is just around the corner. Don't forget to support me with your monthly tickets! Thank you!

I just realized there's an event starting! If you have any extra monthly tickets, don't forget to vote for them! Starting today, there's a bounty: 10,000 bounty / 100 monthly tickets equals one extra chapter, with a guaranteed double chapter every day. I'm determined to finish this story in August! New readers can subscribe with confidence!!

It's almost the end of the month, so don't forget to cast your expiring monthly tickets! The book is nearing its end, with only a few tens of thousands of words left, but I absolutely won't abandon it. I'll write everything I promised, and I'll also complete the characters' development, so please rest assured!

Everything about it is incredibly convoluted. My feeling is that it's impossible to distinguish between primary and secondary elements; the whole thing is in a state of chaos. Furthermore, the descriptions of social and campus life are superficial, and the characters' emotions feel weak due to a lack of foundation and anchor. Overall, it's like a childish game of "I like you, I don't like you; I like you, I just don't like you." Of course, if this is some new writing technique intentionally chosen by the author to highlight the absurdity and fragmentation after rebirth, then it's quite artistic.

It's a new month! Please give me some monthly votes, my darlings, in recognition of my hard work updating!

Is your protagonist a gluttonous beast? It's already 2 million words long, how come he only eats and doesn't poop?

This novel has obvious strengths and weaknesses, but unfortunately, the weaknesses outweigh the strengths so far. Let's start with the strengths. Currently, I think the biggest strength is the storytelling pacing. One event follows another smoothly, with natural transitions. So far, the pacing is very tight, with almost no filler words. Everything revolves around the main storyline, and the main and supporting details are clearly distinguished, which is quite appealing. Secondly, the writing style is good. The character descriptions and plot development are appropriate and fluid. While not necessarily elegant, there are at least no dry or difficult parts. There are also several particularly brilliant passages, which deserves recognition...

I've been working hard to build up some backlog of chapters, and I'll be updating twice a day starting from the 16th. Regarding the reveal of the true identity that everyone's been asking about, I'll write about that on the 18th. From here on, the plot of the final volume will reach its climax, and I estimate it will be finished in August. Please continue to support me during this month!

To sum it up first, this isn't a wish-fulfillment story. Progress: Let's see how a tsundere, awkward princess, shrouded in misunderstanding, is redeemed by a royal princess. You might ask, isn't the protagonist the fallen commander of the kingdom's knightly order? In the novel's context, yes; logically, the protagonist's comical death at the beginning is a setup by the author. Losing the war would lead to the collapse of the Kingdom of York, so why do these three women need to eliminate the protagonist in the great war? The reasons given so far are childish, making this backstory seem... Quite funny. If it were a serious drama, I personally think their complete lack of reason would create even more suspense. Next, the protagonist is reincarnated in a new map...

I've been following this story since it started at tens of thousands of words. Aside from the politically charged elements feeling somewhat superficial and the supernatural power setting and villains being a bit rushed, the beginning was generally enjoyable. Last year, I was too busy with my 996 work schedule and stopped reading around chapter 420. Now, when I come back, it doesn't seem as good anymore. Suddenly adopting an orphan girl and then clinging to her—is it just based on a name and a fleeting connection between the protagonist and the girl? Just because she's a child, can she really push So and Ai off the bed? They're not blood-related, and they've only known each other for a few months. I really don't understand how she can compete with So and Ai, who have gone through life-and-death situations and stumbled along the way...