I Became a Witch, but They All Want to Date Me

Based on my own reading experience, I think there are two main problems that new writers often encounter. One is that their language is dry and difficult to read; the other is that they don't know how to pad their writing, they lack sufficient material, they don't know what to write or how to write it, and often after writing tens of thousands of words, their inspiration completely dries up, and they can't continue. The latter problem doesn't seem very obvious at the moment, or perhaps it doesn't exist, so I'll skip it; as for the former problem, I intend to discuss it in detail. In my opinion, your novel has already developed a preliminary writing style, which I call "Lolita style," and it has been well-received by some readers, which is rare among new writers. At the same time, this style...

The title and synopsis screamed harem, and even included a separate chapter right after release stating that while only Annie explicitly liked the protagonist at first, the others' friendships with her would gradually change in the later stages—it was just a slow burn. Then, midway through, it abruptly switched to pure romance. First, they lured in the harem characters to fleece the readers, then they wrote the pure romance. It's honestly quite disgusting. I read over a million words before realizing it was a complete rip-off. I'm furious.

Sigh, what can I say? It's so hard to find a truly invincible novel these days! Everyone's labeled "invincible," but all you get is a sense of powerlessness! Why label a coming-of-age story as "invincible"? Is the protagonist's talent really that amazing? Isn't it just high-efficiency learning? Combined with the various limitations imposed on her and the vast world-building, you'll find her growth is actually quite slow. And isn't this the quintessential coming-of-age story setting? She's utterly powerless against opponents of similar strength. In battle, she's more like a battlefield intelligence gatherer and analyst than someone who determines victory. For example, cooking a dish...

The title clearly suggests a harem story, but is it actually a pure romance? Thank goodness I read the comments; it's best to avoid this kind of deceptive marketing.

Lately, I've been feeling... Like the cheesy plot of "Prisoner and the Sea"? Because, to be clear, Jiang Cha (Jiang Lin) isn't actually from a different generation than Lin/Hui/Wei, right? Although there seems to be a generational gap, they're all actually part of the new generation. It's so reminiscent of those plots that hype up Jiang Cha's rapid growth and immense potential in the early stages, only to reveal later that there are many more powerful characters! The idea that she's just the chosen one in the early game... That kind of cheesy plot just doesn't feel satisfying. I initially thought Jiang Cha had a broad mind and strong resistance to knowledge contamination, then Jiang Hui appeared, even more powerful and broader; I thought at least Jiang Cha would have a broader mind and better grasp of the rules, then Jiang Lin appeared, even more well-rounded... This is...

In my personal experience, the book contains some confusing or unexplained aspects. For example, the description of Schrödinger's cat in 214 contradicts the main idea of ​​this thought experiment in reality. The book mentions probability, but actually refers to the macroscopic reaction of quantum superposition. Secondly, the concept of the quantum sea is incomplete. In reality, a quantum is the smallest unit of a physical quantity. If matter in reality is composed of a large number of quanta, then it should exhibit properties corresponding to ordinary matter, which clearly contradicts the book's premise, which remains unexplained. Another example is the application of materialism and idealism. Because...

This is a pure love story, not a harem story. If you enjoy stories of growth and pure love, this book is really good. This book features one of the few protagonists that many people chase after but can't win over—a truly captivating character who flirts and runs away without ever getting attached, ultimately finding his only true love.

Damn it, why isn't it updating? Get to the classics! If brother isn't going to update, he should just say so. Why be so perfunctory with his sister? It makes her seem like she's being presumptuous. And it's true, brother is frail and needs more rest. It's the sister's fault for urging him like this; she's hurt his feelings, and it pains her to see him like this.

Seriously, after watching so much, you're telling me this is pure romance? That's ridiculous!

What kind of invincible power does this novel possess? The beginning is all about growth; I don't feel any difference in strength compared to the other witches. Or rather, are there any setbacks in the plot? I'm a little worried after reading reviews saying it's not an invincible novel.