Hey, Stinky Man, Don't Get in the Way of My Selling Magic Potions

It feels like the author can't distinguish between the protagonist's perspective and their own omniscient viewpoint. The protagonist is like an omniscient being, guessing everything correctly. Aside from the protagonist's inner monologues, there's no other plot development, making it difficult to read.

Which chapter is about mugwort?

The author's portrayal of the conspiracy felt very strange; it was too superficial and lacked substance. It was all just the protagonist's one-sided imagination, without any further foreshadowing, which felt odd.

To be honest, the plot was stretched out too long, and the characters' expressions weren't well-described, making the overall reading experience rather unpleasant. It felt a bit like reading an article from the last century, rather stiff and unnatural.

To be honest, Tori is much more humane than that madwoman Lilithia. It's fantastic to be able to experience two different kinds of flavor from one author!

The side story is Ethan's dark side, and he'll have a lot of harem members... Readers who aren't into this should stay away! As for the hentai/hentai version, I won't be writing that for a while. I'll update it in the group later.

Firstly, the updates are fast, and secondly, the overall quality is okay. These are roughly the two advantages. Regarding character development, although most of the writing focuses on the male and female leads, they don't feel very three-dimensional. For example, the author deliberately uses multiple internal struggles and actions to portray the female lead's greed, but money doesn't actually feel that important. Perhaps the author wanted to express her greedy yet willing-to-spend personality, but there's no strong emotional impact. Then there's the male lead. Honestly, replacing him with Xiao Huohuo wouldn't feel out of place at all. If it weren't for the romantic subplot, this character would have very little presence. So far, I only have...

As the title suggests, the author seems confused about adding more chapters these past few days, leading to issues with the characters' emotional and logical development. I won't mention the typos, as I don't really care, but it's clear the author isn't focused. First, there's Tori's romantic storyline. While her interactions with the young master were fine, the scene where she changes clothes and cleans her ear is problematic. Tori has feelings, but not many, and there's been emphasis on restraint earlier. Why suddenly do something like this? If she does, it misses a major plot point where her relationship with the young master rapidly develops, which is a serious problem with the emotional arc. Perhaps the author thought Tori was faking her death to appease the young master, but...

1 million words in less than five months, witnessing the fastest legend of Pineapple Bun

The "what if" side story completely baffled me. I was enjoying following the main story, but this abstract side story was like a bucket of cold water poured on my enthusiasm.