Chased by Magical Girls After Becoming Their Enemy

... Let me reiterate, my rating standards are quite high; six stars doesn't necessarily mean a bad review. The author is a newcomer, and he himself said this book was just for practice, but the good results encouraged him to continue. I can understand that, but this book does have many problems, and I have to say some harsh things, such as: "It's tasteless, but a pity to throw away." First of all, my personal values ​​dislike harem stories; the phrase "They are all my wings" is, frankly, a display of lust, greed, and the author's irresponsibility. This book claims to have "multiple storylines without a harem," but the problem is that it hasn't been shown yet. Originally...

I finished it in one go, so what's there to say? Here are the pros and cons (personal opinion): Pros: 1. It's a relaxing read. The author's writing style is completely original and unique, quite different from many novels I've read. (Of course, I haven't read many novels.) It's light yet clear, slightly playful, especially the various imaginative dialogues or anecdotes interspersed before the main text, which are so funny they make you want to burst out laughing. It will lift your spirits after reading, unless you don't see them. 2. Lots of satisfying moments. Whether it's the subtle transformation from boy to girl, or the process of concealing her identity as a girl from others...

The following opinions are solely my own: The writing style is fairly smooth, and overall there aren't any major problems; it's worth a try if you're looking for something to read. However, the book also has fatal flaws. First, the initial conflict is unclear; the points of contention between the two factions aren't distinct. Just because you inexplicably join one faction doesn't mean you have to fight the opposing faction to the death—it's childish and only happens in video games. Second, aren't magical girls supposed to help people? Fighting the Star-Crossed Girls without a clear purpose or considering the consequences—what have you brought to society? Only road damage, traffic disruption, and harm to social interests. Third, the female supporting characters...

[Very good, a universally acknowledged masterpiece] This is an eight-star rating, but I could easily give it just average... After all, this book doesn't have any particularly profound moments, nor are there many truly moving scenes; it's just so-so. Let me talk about the good points of this book, "After Becoming Enemies with Magical Girls, I Was Pursued by Them." First of all, magical girls were what initially attracted me. Magical girls, well, I quite like them, hehe ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶ But after reading the first chapter, I thought, wow, this book! The feeling it gives is instantly different. It's not about magical girls or ordinary people who aren't magical girls as the main characters, but rather it introduces a new...

Honestly, after reading the last few chapters, I feel the author is adding more and more filler each day. Only a few of these filler chapters actually resonate with the reader. And the word count for filler should be just right. I don't doubt the author's ability to add filler, but everyone reads with anticipation for the next chapter. I hope the author can maintain that anticipation. This is just my personal feeling. If it continues like this, I'll still read it, because it's one of my favorite books, and I'm really looking forward to a perfect ending for the author in Xingzhou.

[Author, please update soon! I'm waiting to read it!] When will you update? [Reporting the 15042nd request for an update.] [Sigh, this is already the 2333rd one this month. The author isn't filling in the plot holes; it's just too much of a rip-off.] [It's said that his readers have already reported him as a missing person.] [If the author doesn't update soon, we'll all starve!]

When I have money, I'll definitely dox that pigeon.

I read the latest update in three days straight, and it's a pretty good yuri (lesbian) novel. The author's writing style is quite good, though it has some flaws, but overall it's a book worth studying and reading. I also learned a lot of useful writing techniques from it. The initial premise was quite confusing, but it gradually became clear after reading for a while. Sometimes, the sudden insertion of certain content left me a bit bewildered, as it felt abrupt and lacked foreshadowing. The transitions between some chapters in the first fifty chapters weren't very smooth (and there was a bit of filler occasionally), but this improved later on. The author is improving; I feel there are many foreshadowing elements...

The book is great. The characters are all very likable. The everyday interactions are very interesting. The plot is well-developed. Now, let me mention some things that personally made me uncomfortable, though others might not. The biggest, and only, thing that bothered me was the slow pacing. Because it was so slow, sometimes I felt like I was reading a regular harem story rather than a yuri story. Although the slice-of-life scenes are really good. Another thing is that it feels too slow; I still can't figure out who the female lead is. Even though it's a harem, there should be a designated main heroine, right? Although tide Yan seems like the main heroine, she seems to have been offline for a long time. Please...

I'm just telling you it's good, anyway, just take a look (I bet some people decide whether to read it based on reviews, like me, right?). If you're new here, I think you should check it out, it's quite interesting, the content is good and very nice, just great! So why worry about so much? →_→ Just read it! Now, let me fill in the word count: zero alcohol, oxyphenol, hydroxyl hydrogen, hydrogen hydroxy acid, caustic hydrogen, dizero ether, positive oxoalkane, oxyethylene, hydrogen hydroxide, polyhydroxy acid anhydride, caustic hydrogen, decyanated zero aldehyde oxime, dihydrogen monoxide, hydrogenated desulfonated sulfuric acid, hydroxyl hydrogen, decarbonized formaldehyde, decarbonized glucose, decarbonylformic acid, oxohydrogen sulfide, hydrogen...