A Love Poem with the Gods

Qingming Festival: May the departed rest in peace, and may the living cherish life! Qingming arrives, pear blossoms smile, evening songs fill the air, and a hundred flowers drift. On Qingming Festival, we express our sorrow, gratitude, and appreciation. Parents' kindness and friends' affection have accompanied me throughout my life. May sunshine and dew always bring joy, rain or shine! Wishing you health, happiness, and a joyful life! On Qingming Festival, a hundred flowers bloom, and the scenery is beautiful; go for a spring outing, enjoy the spring views, and have a joyful time; send greetings, express care, and offer heartfelt blessings. On Qingming Festival, wishing you peace, happiness, and a cheerful mood. Qingming arrives, pear blossoms smile, evening songs fill the air, and a hundred flowers drift. Spring is in full bloom, orioles return, and ten thousand willows sway gracefully in the wind. The wind rises on Qingming...

It's been a long time since I've been able to sit down and read a book like this. Time has passed, but I still remember the fairytale-like emotions that Love Poetry brought me four years ago. Revisiting it now, I offer flowers at the grave of this book to commemorate the stories I love. 💐 Saying goodbye to you, a poem of love with the gods.

Like the perfect score, it's absolutely flawless and not to be missed. The cover and title attracted me, but nobody else is reading it. However, the plot is really good. The story of moving from the countryside to the capital is quite normal, and it doesn't have the mindless opening of most other novels. The plot is also very engaging. The character development is excellent, especially the personalities of the protagonist and the people around him. I'm not good at writing book reviews, and this seems to be my first time. The book has just started, and it's already very well written. Keep up the good work, author! The updates seem a bit slow; maybe I'm stockpiling chapters.

I mean, it's already 2022, when will the Love Poem be updated?

Having reached the end of Chapter 2, the plot feels severely padded, and the characters' forced stupidity and contrived plot dragging are quite jarring. A god who has lived for tens of thousands of years, plus a sage, is less cautious than a group of slant followers. Unleashed burst skills are not used (considering human rights? Do slant followers who want to destroy the world even need to talk about human rights?). Youlan is just thrown into a ritual, and time is wasted on trivial matters in emergencies. Also, the fight scenes... The plot is really a bit stagnant. I'd like to know how it goes later, and whether it has improved.

This book is quite good. I personally found the plot quite enjoyable, and I really liked the writing style, especially the interactions with the big fox and the ice ball, which were very interesting. The character development was also excellent. However, in the latter half of the fourth volume, all these strengths vanished without a trace. The writing suddenly became padded, with each chapter containing significantly less content than before. This is understandable, as many authors produce padded content. But the ending of the fourth volume can only be described as a disaster. First, I must acknowledge that the character of Youyue is very well-developed, but in this case, it may not be a good thing. Youyue is portrayed as a mentally twisted individual who has committed heinous crimes...

I was drawn in by the cover and title, and have been reading since the beginning. The plot is indeed good, and the character development is quite good. However, there have been some serious retconning lately. For example, it was mentioned earlier that almost no one except top-tier powerhouses can touch Ziyao, or they will be frozen solid, while Youyue was unharmed after touching her. Also, ice magic only exists in the ancient magic system, and basically only Ziyao can use it. Furthermore, it was mentioned earlier that no one can turn water magic into ice magic, and then suddenly several people appear who can use it. I hope the author will revisit the established settings. The author's writing is quite good, and I hope they will continue to work on this.

The premise is interesting and novel, and the beginning is quite captivating. However, the protagonist's personality is a bit unclear. Initially, he's solely focused on reverting to being a boy, acting incredibly aloof. Later, he becomes unusually outgoing and familiar, which feels somewhat jarring. The story itself is fairly engaging, but the resolution of the "crisis" lacks depth and feels too simplistic. Also, the protagonist's initial coldness towards strangers followed by sudden warmth towards a complete stranger feels abrupt. I still agree with my consistent point: characters' actions should align with their established character traits, appearing natural and unforced. I hope the author continues to improve, particularly in the emotional and plot development...

... Sweeping tombs...

This book completely redefined my reading experience, but unfortunately, after waiting so long, it still hasn't come to life. It's your fault that I have so few books to read! [Sfem:3:307]