After Being Reborn, My Hidden Identity Turned Out to Be a Vampire

This is truly a promising work with great potential. The writing style in the early parts might have been a bit odd, with some forced plot points. But having followed it this far, my feeling is that it started slowly but improved dramatically! Perhaps this is a common problem for first-time authors – the pacing and writing style aren't quite right in the beginning. However, this issue improved significantly in the later parts of the first volume. The writing becomes much smoother, and the plot becomes increasingly interesting. I'm really looking forward to seeing how the story develops! Um… in short, author, can you please update faster? Ten updates a day, please? (Laughs)

The college entrance exam lasts three days, then I come back.

Overall, the storyline and logic are decent (in my opinion, a rare gem among Pineapple Bun authors). I'm really looking forward to the rest of Bai Ling's story, although the writing style and logic in the early parts have a few minor issues (a common problem for most Pineapple Bun authors, including myself). For example, the writing style and language might not be very refined (I realized and improved this in my own work later on), and the logic might need some more planning to avoid becoming formulaic. Anyway, I'm really looking forward to the later developments! Keep it up! I've also asked a few friends to add your book to their favorites!

Subjectively speaking, it's not bad and has potential. It maintains a good balance across various aspects, making it a fairly good work, and I believe its success won't stop there. However, there's still room for improvement in certain areas, such as the expression of actions, emotions, and the characters' contexts. The psychological expressions of independent thought should be addressed, and these should be balanced with linguistic symmetry. Also, regarding supporting characters, the emotions shouldn't be completely exposed; leaving some suspense is always better.

I stayed up all night reading over a hundred chapters after the main character fell into the sea, but I still didn't encounter the second female lead and even got a knife in my mouth. It made me so depressed I couldn't sleep. Author, maybe you should compensate me?

Wow, this old book is back on the list and it's even making it onto the bestseller list (No. 13 on the recommendation list)!

Huh? Holy crap, it's resurrected!

Yay! The author is back in action!

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The author will finish their college entrance exams next summer, so updates should be available then. [Sfem:25:839][sfem:25:839]