The Hero Has Turned into a White-Haired Demon Lord!

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The early chapters were decent, with good character development. However, the princess and the guard's personalities were poorly developed. Logically, these two should be part of the harem, but in my personal opinion, they displayed mostly negative traits. The guard's attitude towards the original male lead was awful, and even if there was a reason, it still made me feel nauseous. Secondly, the princess—the author has to take the blame for this—the scene where the princess and queen swapped protagonists felt abrupt, making the queen seem cold-hearted and the princess seem like she was breaking up a couple. This completely ruined the satisfying moment of the protagonist's reunion with the queen. And the princess directly demanding the protagonist back, and the queen even...

The main characters are all men in their thirties. You yourself wrote that he frequents brothels, broke into the princess's boudoir at a young age, risked his life to steal weapons from the princess, and spied on his teammates changing clothes. He already disliked the princess, yet you still make it seem like the protagonist is afraid of her. I just don't understand why you keep emphasizing that such a powerful character is afraid of the princess blaming him for lying to her. Why does he engage in bestiality the moment they meet, and why does he seem to lose his intelligence? With this kind of development, it's less like a harem and more like a bloody history of the protagonist being gang-raped.

First, beginners might mistakenly think 'Kevin' is the protagonist, creating a negative first impression of the drunkard Lin Mu. Without careful reading, one might perceive the protagonist as a villain. Secondly, the transformation into a demon girl form is problematic. After finishing the book, I found that most of the storylines involving the girl form were suggestive and appealing to certain reader preferences. Then there's the issue of the protagonist's power loss. I personally feel that the power must be regained, and it shouldn't be delayed as much as possible; of course, I don't object to the author's writing style. The first volume's flow seems fine, but I didn't understand the second volume's part about going to school. After all, you were a crazy hero before, and now you've become a cute little...

Terribly sorry! Seeing everyone's comments, but without losing any favorites, I'm wondering if you're all waiting for an answer. (Of course, it's also possible that Pineapple Bun's method of removing favorites was indeed a bit awful.) In short, I am very sorry that this has caused you an unpleasant reading experience. Seeing that everyone was very concerned about Alice giving Lin Lin away, I felt ashamed.

Alice's reasoning is utterly absurd. Simply trusting the protagonist, she sends him, who has almost lost his magic, to be his personal maid to protect her niece. Unlike the readers, she doesn't know the protagonist has superhuman abilities. This action directly puts both the protagonist and her niece in danger. It doesn't fit the image of a queen who balances the various forces in a country, nor does it fit the character of someone who loves the protagonist and her niece.

First of all, congratulations to the author on the release of the book, but I don't think the explanation is quite accurate. Is it simply about trusting the silly little girl to protect the niece? Is that what it means? And they just give it away like that? I still don't quite understand.

It's been revised, it should be approved tomorrow, everyone can go back and check. (I won't make this mistake again next time!)

That's about it. There are a lot of plot holes, the protagonist's personality changes so drastically it's like two completely different people. After waiting for so many years, Lin Mu is handed over to his daughter as a maid. Fei Li only stayed with Lin Mu for two days and acted like she'd lost her soul. She even awkwardly picked her toes when she encountered the princess at school.

I was really enjoying this book, but this latest chapter is so baffling. Why would they do this before it was even released? I really don't understand. Let's see how the author handles it.