The Ashes of the Lonely City's Beauty

I won't even bother praising things like "the author's writing is very smooth and the details are well described" 😂 There are 95 comments, and most of them are saying these things. What I want to praise is [serious face]\ Okay, this isn't a compliment, it's a question 😊 Author, you must have put a lot of effort into the titles of each chapter, right? So neat and tidy, it's so artistic! 😂😂😂 Next are the suggestions. Speaking of literature and art, I want to say that this is a novel! Using too much literary and artistic flair can actually backfire. Take book titles, for example. It seems like almost all the novel titles on 17k are like this ヾ (*⌒㉨⌒*) ゞ The Beauty of the Lonely City He probably meant that there was an empty city where a beautiful woman was burned to ashes. Don't say he followed the entire text meticulously, don't say he's so artistic, don't say he took so much of your effort. What I want to say is... Can't we make it clearer at a glance? Tell me, aren't the books you're reading now, or the more popular female-oriented novels, all about domineering CEOs falling in love with me, or ruthless husbands only recognizing me? These titles are so obvious. Tell me, isn't the book you're reading now, or the popular male-oriented novel, "I Pick Up Attributes in the Apocalypse" or "The Zombie Female Bodyguard in the Apocalypse"? Tell me, if you saw such a literary and artistic book title in the vast sea of ​​books, would you continue reading it if it weren't your book? That's all I have to say. It might be a bit harsh. If you don't like it, feel free to block, delete, or criticize. But please have mercy and don't criticize my book (›´ω`‹) Of course, this book wasn't written by me, it was written by you. But it doesn't say you have to do this or that; if you don't like it, just ignore me. Welcome back! 🎉 Tickets have been delivered, but there are no bottles left today.

I went out with friends this afternoon... So I didn't have time to leave a comment... First, I looked at the title and synopsis. The title is fine, but the synopsis doesn't seem to fit the scope of a synopsis? It feels more like an intro than a synopsis. Secondly, after looking at all your chapter titles, I noticed that they are all in a five-character format, which is quite poetic and demonstrates the author's writing skills. After reading your first few chapters, I was surprised to find no clichés. Even the plot of the female lead falling into the water and being rescued was completely different in nature. The author's writing is excellent; the psychological and action descriptions are all just right, especially the children's psychology, which is written in a truly witty and adorable way. Your readership seems low; I suggest spending more time in the community, giving feedback, and connecting with experienced members. Also, try to sign a contract if possible. Wishing you continued success with your work!

Ancient Chinese romance novels truly test an author's language skills and knowledge, and this author handled them all brilliantly! And the pseudo-sibling dynamics are just so incredibly sweet! (Drooling...)

Honestly, this book is truly well-written. The synopsis and title suggest a tragedy, reminiscent of Fei Wo Si Cun's style. However, the writing reveals a high level of literary skill, and the plot is cleverly crafted. Stay true to yourself and don't let current trends sway you. With your style, the future looks promising.

The writing style is immediately apparent from the synopsis~ and sure enough, as you read on, the writing is truly superb~ It's very delicate and feels very soft. I really like it. I've added it to my bookshelf, and I'll keep an eye on it. Keep it up, Dada!

The author's writing is excellent, demonstrating a deep understanding of the subject and a keen grasp of character traits. However, the author could work on paragraph breaks, especially at the beginning of the first chapter, where the paragraphs are too long. Overly long paragraphs in online novels can easily cause reader fatigue and lead to abandonment. The author's writing style is refreshing; keep it up! (ง •̀_•́)ง

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Good afternoon. Sending you a ticket to show my support and encourage you to keep writing!

Checking in and sharing my thoughts, watching the vivid and expressive brushstrokes, keep it up!

I've been checking in and posting, and I've been following the exciting moments and articles. Keep it up!