The Fallen Arc

Wow! This is the only piece of writing I've ever read that really caught my eye. It's the kind of writing that makes you want to skim through it, but then you're immediately drawn in and can't help but keep reading! Hehe, the male lead is my type—refined, elegant, and with a restrained, ascetic feel. The descriptions of the protagonist's childhood are wonderful. Although it's a childhood story, the author vividly portrays the protagonist's innocence, playfulness, cuteness, and personality traits, creating a very strong visual image. Keep updating! I want to save up all the content and read it all at once! (Hehe, don't let my seemingly novice writer appearance fool you, I also have another identity: a romance novel expert (｡ò ∀ ó｡)) Many aloof male protagonists don't truly embody that aloofness. They're either too bland, making them unappealing, or too flirtatious, spouting nauseating sweet nothings in front of the female lead, acting like a lecherous old man. In short, I support it!!!

Well, I'm not really good at commenting on this type of novel. Firstly, my experience with romance is pitifully small, and secondly, the only novels of this kind I've read in high school are the "Liang Sheng, Can We Not Be Sad" series. But based solely on my limited knowledge, if I were to dare compare this novel to "Liang Sheng," I think the author's writing is superb. Putting aside everything else, the atmosphere created alone is incredibly moving. An arc is curved, but it was once a straight line. It only softened because of you, bowing down for you, and the straight line became an arc.

⭐️It's so well written. In a heavy overall environment, it's Su Lan who has a warm heart. I always feel happy whenever I see the soft and cute Su Lan. ⭐️A huge fire destroyed the orphanage, and Xiao Sulan's mother was also gone. Her father was on the verge of collapse. The child was truly innocent. I hate people who shamelessly condemn others online, and I hate even more the media becoming the final straw that breaks the camel's back. What broke Xiao Su Lan's father was his wife's death, the innocent children in the orphanage, and the so-called human nature. ⭐️The only light, my favorite part is the relationship between Xiao Su Lan and her older brother. The older brother is tough on the outside but soft on the inside. He says he doesn't like it and doesn't want it, but he will still pull open the bed curtains when Xiao Su Lan is scared by thunder. He will ask the nurse to turn off the TV because he doesn't want her to hear the vulgar words from the outside world. He will also eat with her because he is worried about her. ⭐️I really love your writing! It's not just about romance; it also explores the warmth and coldness of human relationships, and delves into the lack of love and morbid possessiveness of children in orphanages. Waiting for updates, wishing it great success ❤️

Another day of diligently following the novel, please update soon!

I don't know why, but turning the first chapter made my originally calm mind feel a little profound. The background was profound, the characters were profound, and it suddenly reminded me of "Walking in the Day and Night". First, let's look at the writing style. The plot is explained, and the foreshadowing is laid. The characters' personalities are clearly defined and have a good sense of layering. The only shortcoming is that more descriptions of facial expressions or psychological states could be added. Every action or emotion should have an underlying psychological outburst. In addition, the plot and the main content foreshadowed in the later chapters should be described in detail with sufficient space. Secondly, regarding the plot, to be honest, it was indeed refreshing. The orphan's grievances in the orphanage immediately made people want to keep reading. Moreover, after reading the first few chapters, I even had a vague idea of ​​what would happen next. Whether the main tone was sadness or joy and lightness was obvious. However, sometimes you don't have to be too serious when writing. Occasionally, a 180° twist can be refreshing. Also, sometimes being too emotionally invested in the protagonist can be a fatal flaw. In conclusion, it's a great script, a great plot, and the immersion and engaging techniques are all excellent. I won't say more flattering things, but I hope your book continues to be a huge success.

After reading it, the first thing I want to say is that the author's descriptions of the characters' emotions and psychology are very delicate. I felt that my emotions followed the author's words. What we see now reveals a very serious social phenomenon: in the era of advanced social media, people's lack of judgment about the accuracy of news has led to a lot of so-called cyberbullying! I feel so sorry for Su Lan, my darling!!! I bought this after reading the synopsis, and the male lead's character really appeals to me! Keep up the good work, author! (ง •̀_•́)ง Looking forward to your return visit!

Good evening, everyone! Keep up the good work, everyone!

Very good, very good overall. The cover is simple and clear. I will continue to support it and read on slowly. There is a lot I can learn from it. I have added it to my favorites. I support the original and will subscribe!

I've only read the first two chapters of your article, but even that has given me a lot to think about. Children are the purest beings in this world. Their appearance, their parents' character, and their teachers' character are all like dyes. The children in the orphanage were afraid of strangers, which deeply moved me. Why are they afraid? I feel it's because they're afraid of being abandoned. Killing them is indeed terrifying, but abandoning them seems even more horrifying to me. Your first two chapters gave me that feeling; those scenes were right before my eyes, creating a very strong sense of immersion. It's something I should learn from.

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