Hogwarts Doesn't Need a Savior

The characterization is really good

The character creation is a bit problematic but still very vivid The plot unfolds reasonably and smoothly, but in my opinion it is a bit impatient. It could have been slower. More than a thousand chapters would have been enough, which is a pity. The structure and foreshadowing are very tight, and occasionally excessive but harmless. It's a pity that the author's grasp and reshaping of the original characters is too poor. He only grasps the form but not the spirit. The original characters are vivid but the original characters are flat, which is a common failure in fan fiction. Another problem is that the dialogues are artificial and unnatural, but I can't be too demanding. It's been a long time since I've seen a web article with lively dialogues. To sum up, I give it a score of 9.3 Within the normal range of online articles. It is a good book and worth reading.