I’m in Shrouding the Heavens, but the System Is in Perfect World

Everything is fine. The writing is quite good. There is one thing: those who learn from me will live, and those who are like me... Will die. I have written this sentence so many times. Someone who is anything but a mortal. If your pursuit is not that high, can't you take the same path? The reason is all for your own good. It's for your own good not to give it to you. It's for your own good not to teach you. If two people cannot walk on the same road, this setting is wrong.

It's so long-winded, one thing is repeated over and over again from beginning to end.

There is a plot from the beginning, but the plot at the end accounts for 1/10, and the self-description accounts for 9/10. Most of them are self-descriptions, describing some things that have nothing to do with the plot and talking about some past things. About myself, the main plot is sometimes chaotic and sometimes normal. The writing is not good, too watery

The last fifty or sixty chapters should have been written by AI. It is recommended to only read the front

It's so watery in the back

The first part is good, but the last part should be AI, all kinds of chaos and eating books.

The plot is okay, but there is too much nonsense. It becomes uncomfortable to listen to the same thing for a long time.

Extremely wordy language

It's repeated in many places, but Ye Fan's four ninth levels are impossible to read.