Reborn in Tokyo with Naruto

It is not brainless, has strong logic, and grasps human nature just right. The only regret is that there are too few protagonist scenes in the early stage, but the plot about the protagonist is very well interspersed. Compared with some books by Qimao that have high ratings but poor plots, such a rating is really not worthy of the level of this book.

I like to see group portraits. Each character is full-bodied and has his or her own joys and sorrows. They are not the backdrop for the protagonist.

After reading more than 50 chapters, after a conflict with the police, it suddenly turned into a lawn mowing game. It was just in my childhood. I don't know if there are other monsters in the back that are not created by the protagonist, but it has gradually become out of taste. .

It was arranged by the author. Otherwise, it would have been lost long ago. He also acted like he had an IQ. Shinji

The content of the plot is too commentary, and the characters are average. I don't know if so many words are used to describe the characters, or if the island country is just deformed like this! The poor continuity of things has nothing to do with the outline you mentioned. You can change it to side tasks to practice and increase your proficiency! Nothing outstanding! This is the history of the student's pathological development!

When I was halfway through this book, I was already planning to write a long review, and now I have read it all. I would give a 9.5 For the first 300 chapters of this book, a 9 for the first and middle stages, a 7.5 From the middle to the end, a 9 for the final stage, and an 8 for the ending. All in all, I would still like to give this book a good review. After all, I have finished reading it, so I can't just throw away the bowl and scold my mother. Although the author is writing about the Naruto system, there are not a few of them in the whole article, and the setting is full of loopholes. I have wanted to complain about this for a long time, but the author actually said this at the end, "I must first admit a fact that may be seen through by some lovely readers - I have not watched "Naruto"." I didn't have anything to say, I smiled with relief, I had suspected this for a long time, my judgment was correct😂 Let me briefly mention a few points for readers' reference regarding settings. 1. There are not many elements of Naruto in the whole story. Those who don't know it might think that they are cultivating immortals and keep calling for spiritual power. Not many people know how to perform the knot seal, so they don't even know 😂 2. The Ninjutsu learned through the system is too general. For example, Water Release is a series of Ninjutsu related to Water Release in the original book. Even so, it doesn't express much. Fire escape is directly distorted into fire control ability, which are completely two different things. I have never seen a ninja directly use chakra to "divide the sea of fire" 3. The animals here are directly written similar to Journey to the West, and they became spirits with the guidance of gods. Agriculture and animal husbandry in the world of Naruto are normal, so why don't you see any success? 4. The Snake Girl in Longdi Cave practiced immortality and was inspired by the immortal inside to become humanoid. It's not like becoming a sperm and automatically growing legs, otherwise Gamakichi Gamabunta would have a human form. 5. The author is not clear about the settings of the Sharingan. To become an eternal kaleidoscope, you must have a kaleidoscope from your relatives to sacrifice. You don't just have to continue to feel the pain. I'm sorry for Takahashi and I'm too lazy to complain. 6. The left and right eyes of the Sharingan are related ninjutsu. · The power of Obito/Kakashi: the left eye (Kakashi) is for long-distance teleportation, and the right eye (Obito) is for self-inflation/inhalation. · Itachi's Amaterasu and Tsukuyomi: Tsukuyomi has the left eye and Amaterasu has the right eye (the setting book "The Book of Persons" makes it clear). · Sasuke's Amaterasu and added earth life: Amaterasu in the left eye, and earth life in the right eye (controlling Amaterasu's form). Poor Takahashi, it's just Hollow (the application of Kamui) plus Amaterasu. It's too confusing. And considering that the original work already has Hollow, this kind of thing is unique. It's best to change it to another ability. 7. Go to 1,2. There is too little Ninjutsu performance, and it does not reflect the ever-changing nature of ninja combat. Of course you are an invincible style. But well-known ninjutsu like Rasengan, Chidori, Raikiri, Rain Tiger Freestyle Jutsu, Flying Thunder God, etc., Have no performance. I remember learning the Rasengan, but I have never seen it used. 8. The author has an incomplete understanding of the Six Paths. Let's not talk about the power of Yang and how the power of Yin comes from. The so-called transformation of the Six Paths is essentially the transformation of Otsutsuki. The body of the Six Paths plus the power of the Six Paths. For example, Madara is the bloodline of Indra plus the immortal body of Hashirama (Asura), the power of yin and yang transforms the body (shaping the samsara eye) + the ten-tailed jinchuriki, the formal six paths, and the opening of three eyes. The protagonist Otsutsuki's bloodline can only be explained systematically, but you don't even have senjutsu or tailed beasts, and you can't even compare to a half-time Six Paths like Naruto Sasuke. You can open your eyes, but you can't become a formal Six Paths. 9. Continuing from 8, to be precise, the protagonist has senjutsu (a setting problem). Ninjas cannot directly absorb natural energy into sages. And even if the protagonist can absorb it, it is completely unsystematic, and it does not even have the amount of Naruto's clone in Mt. Myoboku. It is impossible to do it without clear study of the three major celestial arts. Just wait to become a stone statue of Mt. Myoboku. And you don't have a tailed beast to help you absorb it. Even with a special physique like Jugo's, who is born with the ability to absorb natural energy, he cannot directly enter the "controllable sage mode", but instead manifests as a violent curse seal. 10. Basically nothing, just say something. Logically speaking, the protagonist cannot use blur, but it can be explained by the system. But is your kaleidoscope ability too strong? Let's not talk about it. It is almost the same as a shadow clone. Why do your left and right eyes have the same ability? What's more, there is a pupil technique that can freely adjust the amount of chakra. 11. It's true that they are basically gone. There may have been some during the reading process, but I have forgotten them now. Okay, I've complained so much, I love you deeply, I hate you so much😂 Let's talk about the plot setting (bushi)😂 1. In fact, the author's self-understanding is quite clear. For example, in the last chapter's self-reflection, he has already said a lot of the issues I want to say. For example, group portraits are not well written, too many characters lead to a poor look and feel, and the invincible flow tests the writing skills (but the author is still very capable in writing this kind of behind-the-scenes flow. I watched it with relish in the early stage, and it was enjoyable). If you can't grasp it in the later stage, can it only be said to be the disadvantages of the invincible flow🌝 2. The emotional drama is incomplete. In terms of personality, the protagonist has almost no changes. It is like this from the first chapter to the last scene, but the protagonist is not Fang Yuan, which is a bit bad (in my opinion). Wakabe's early writing was very good, and it felt like a daily drama (Newlyweds😏), so I didn't say that the writing was not good, but the author almost didn't care about it, and the relationship was not even confirmed on the surface. Kaifu is so cute 😭 3. Connect to 1 and 2. As you can see from No. 2 Middle School, in fact, this is also a kind of invincible style of writing. On the surface, it is a sweet love (a bit like Long Aotian or a civilized school bully🌝), but behind the scenes it is the origin of global chaos😏. But that's not what the author meant 😭 4. It can be said that the author's portrayal of group portraits and characters is still strong. Of course, the role of the protagonist in disguise is very small, and the group portraits are a bit complicated. For example, the love between people 🐍, I thought I was watching Xu Xian Generally speaking, what the author writes is quite to my liking, but if some problems can be corrected, this book will still be very good. However, the popularity of the author is a bit low. In the sea of free novels, it is already considered a good product. Why do I feel that not many people read it? By the way, by the way, author, if you see me, be sure to reply to me🌝

The male protagonist is a central air conditioner... A bit disgusting... Can't stand it

It's a very good group portrait novel, the content is not brainless, and it incorporates many strange legends from Japan, South America, and Europe. The overall review is a good book. The shortcoming is like what the author said. I originally wanted to write about one person's unique method, but later I couldn't change it, so I wrote a group portrait, resulting in four different images.

I can't bear to read almost 500 chapters, but I can only say that it's getting more and more bullshit. The first part was fine, but the second part is all about offline supporting roles. The improvement in strength depends on offline explosive upgrades. The main character is cowardly to the point of no limit, so just give up.

Great freedom?