Naruto Captured Byakuren at the Beginning

This book deserves a good review! 1 At present, 99.999% Of Naruto novels are about Konoha licking dogs and Naruto licking dogs. Only this book is unique, from the establishment of Kirigakure Village, to its development and growth, to the unification of the ninja world. 2 The protagonist's cultivation and abilities finally have innovative breakthroughs! 99.999% Of similar novels about Naruto use the Samsara Eye and the Tsangikan Eye as invincible, and those with blood-successor eyes are the strongest. However, the protagonist of this book was not there from the beginning! Especially the water escape is very powerful. The opponents of the 3 protagonists, especially the first and second generation Hokage and Uchiha Madara, have relatively reasonable combat capabilities. Other novels of the same type simply boast that the fighting power of these two people is as high as the sky, and they are invincible among the invincible. I think the combat power described in this book is more reasonable. 4 The rest of the supporting cast is no longer dominated by the people from Konoha, which is better. But there are still some later. Of course, from the perspective of refreshing writing, this novel's system cheat may have the least sense of existence! Almost rarely.

The book is good, but as a fanfic, it's not good. The plot was a bit distorted in the later stages. But if you look at this story based on Naruto's world view, the life of an old man who came from the Warring States period is very well described, but his combat power is a little bit weak, sometimes too weak. It feels like it's a derivative of Naruto's worldview. Don't worry too much about it when reading it. It's better than most novels, but it's not really good. Other comments are a bit too arbitrary.

The third Naruto fanfic I read is very good-looking and the ending is quite touching. The author embodies the feelings of an old man born in the Warring States Period. Unfortunately, too few people read it.

Sure enough, books rated below 8.9 Are unreadable. It's just that the writing is not good. Please respect your profession and let me, a reader, write better than you. How can this be embarrassing?

Nonsense, make up the word count

Bad review! There were too many sailors, and Zhiwen slipped away.

The protagonist is indecisive, capricious, and timid. More than 80% of the entire text is nonsense made up of words. A system spends 99% of its time sleeping, and while sleeping, the protagonist's cultivation level never increases and he never practices.

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The plot is good, but the writing is not that good.

So-so