Dou Po: Obtain All Yao Lao's Memories at the Beginning

The first three to four hundred chapters were written relatively slowly, and the author also mentioned that the benefits were not good, but the subsequent plot was written very quickly. The biggest poisonous points in the first hundred chapters were the interaction between the protagonist and the Little Medical Fairy and the dialogue in which the protagonist saves Qing Lin. They have become much better since Hai Bodong became a Douzong. In the early and mid-term development of the protagonist, because there is no background, he relies on the system to continuously recycle resources and control his subordinates through various controls. In the later stage, the development basically relies on the replacement of the system. The description of each character is relatively detailed, especially that of Qing Lin.

After having to say it, I feel like I still have to say it so I feel. I have to say... It's just a joke. The feeling of this book is that the first few hundred chapters feel very slow. But after I arrived, I felt like I wanted to read it again soon, but when I got to the last one, I felt that the author's writing was a bit uncomfortable. Obviously they can ascend very early. It's just one less person. But they have to stay in the world that was once controlled by them for a hundred years. It feels like a waste of time. All in all, this book is very interesting. It is recommended to take a look.

How can I put it this way? There is nothing too poisonous about this book, but there is only one female protagonist. The female characters and heroines in the original book are either controlled or turned into passers-by. I personally don't like this taste. When I first read this book, I thought it was to recruit Medusa, but in the end, she became a slave🤨

In the same novel, it can be considered a good work. After all, this is the first time the author has written. It can be seen that the writing is very good for the first time, but I still can't help but want to say something ugly. The author was single when he wrote this novel. In fact, if he is really inexperienced, there is no need to write so much about love and love. At first, I thought it was quite refreshing and interesting. But the more I read, the more annoying it becomes. I always write about the male and female protagonist Niwai. At least half of the chapter is Niwai. I personally think it is better to rewrite it in the context of Dou Po. Main plot, sub-romance. The author writes too much romance. It's too watery. You can tell at a glance. OK, I'll show you my cards. If you are tired, please write something more specific (squinting dog head). It's always limited to kissing, hugging and talking dirty. If you want more water, just add more water. It's all watery. If you don't describe it in detail, I'm really annoyed (¯へ¯)

It's much worse than the original work. The heroine is confiscated and she is mumbling every day. I don't know what time the protagonist has traveled through. She is lonely. It's very funny. The author is also short, young and has low self-esteem, so he can write this kind of novel. It's a matter of perspective.

I really can't stand it. I've been in bed with the little doctor fairy since I was 22 or 3 years old, and I've been doing all sorts of disgusting things, and even bathed together. That girl is a child, and the protagonist has a soul of several decades. Such people must be mentally abnormal. And Queen Medusa is used directly as a tool puppet. You might as well follow Xiao Yan.

It features a single female protagonist, and I force other fans to be either stallions or seeders. It's really disgusting. As a normal person, I can't watch that. It's hard to imagine that people who like to watch harems are actually greasy, wretched, perverted men. If you like a single heroine, just jump in. The article has no shortcomings except that you like to brush aside the edges. If you like watching dead people in the harem, just leave.

I have never seen a woman treat the little medical fairy as a child bride. If you don't write about women, you will die.

It's a pure dog-licking story, it's about abusing the main character, it suppresses the protagonist's combat power, and it's nothing. The cheating genius is not as good as the poisonous body of a little medical fairy after he is unsealed. His cultivation is hunted down by others later, and he is trained to be a rake for flirting with girls. Whoever sees it is disgusting!

Not bad, the protagonist is an old man, his brain is on the line, and he doesn't jump out! 🐂🐂🐂