Dragon Raja: Back to Seventeen

Everything written above is very good, but what is the emotional line? Xia Mi, Hui Liyi, Chen Wenwen, and Su Xiaoqiang all like Lu Mingfei?! 😡😡😡 I really can't stand it. Even if I like him, there are still two female protagonists. I really can't comment. From a very good book, it has become a dirty pornographic book. It is recommended to skip the emotional line and read it!!

The author is great, can you publish another book? I really like the two female protagonists, Natsumi and Eri, and the stories are basically not too biased. It's not like some magically modified fanfics on the market. I really hope that the author will publish another one. There are not many such good works.

How to say it? Among dragon fan fiction, this is considered very, very good. Anyway, I think it's very pretty Although there is a little mistake (in the plot) But some people think, what kind of bicycle do you want?!!!

In a dragon fanfic, Caesar only appears more than 200 times. This is a very outrageous thing. The Dragon Tribe is a group portrait novel. As a trio of Japanese cowherds, Caesar is one of the souls of this book and should not be so unknown. The same senior brother appeared far more often than Caesar. Secondly, let's discuss the author's writing style. The most attractive thing about Dragon Clan is not his worldview, which is not huge, but the writing style of the old thief and the regrets of the readers. As a fan creation, regrets must be satisfied, but the writing style does not have the feeling of the old thief at all, which makes people look very funny. Finally, there are too many emotional lines. The Dragon Clan is full of youthful passion and youthful regrets. This book is full of emotional lines. Chu Xia Dang's emotional lines are simply discarded. What about the past of Teacher Daye and Brother Shafei? All in all, it's hard to comment. It's like tasteless food. It's a pity to throw it away.

Dragon Family is a novel with a lot of holes and a bad plot, but that doesn't stop it from being well-written because every character is well-drawn, so it's full of regrets. It's like a friend I just met died, like a well-crafted scam, and everyone was struck down by reality. So there are so many fanfics, and everything we cherish can have a happy ending here. Every time I read a fanfic, I always have to read the original work again, as if the unfinished dragon clan is the real world, and Lu Mingfei is the real us, with a bumpy road and lost everything.

It is taken from the original work, and indeed the changes are a bit big. I treat it as another work that has nothing to do with the Dragon Clan. It is indeed well written, but the logic is still a little unclear (›´ω`‹). What is a bit unacceptable is Natsumi and Eri. Some details are different from the original work, but overall it is a very good novel, but the original author may be a little uncomfortable with it.

This is the most complete and best-looking Dragon Clan fanfic I have ever read, bar none. Although there are some broken CPs in the middle, isn't that what fanfic is? The only regret is Lu Mingze. I feel that Lu Mingze in this article has become very weak, even the original version of him He is not even 1/5 of the strength and rarely appears. He is my favorite in the anime, and then there is Nono. He did not give Nono an ending until the end. There is also Caesar. Caesar may not have feelings for Nono anymore, but his character and pride will not abandon Nono.

At first I thought it was okay. I thought it wouldn't be like the original book where all the characters were written to death. I thought it would be sweet. But at the end, the whole group was destroyed. The original book was still written to death one by one. But this book is better. The finale is about to take them all away in one go. It's really disgusting.

The writing is very good. Although Xia Mi was accepted (I am Chu Xia Dang), the relationship between Lu and Xia was written very naturally and not abruptly. The holes in the original work were also filled in very well. Come on!

How to put it, in fact, it may be difficult for most of the original fans to accept the idea of ​​opening a harem, but the emotional line of this book is actually relatively natural. After all, it is also a fan fiction, and it is impossible to completely follow the original work, and there will also be some of the author's own thoughts. The fighting in this fan is well written, it is really passionate, and it also fills in a lot of pitfalls, especially Long Wu, the writing is not bad, you can read it