
Douluo Dalu: Taking in Xiao Wu as a Disciple with the Shadow Army
斗罗之带着黑影兵团收徒小舞
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.5M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
Synopsis
All-time: Popularity, Must-read votes.
735Chapters
308kPopularity
980Readers
994Must-read votes
8.7Score
362Ratings
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Reader comments 28
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Overall, this book is readable, as long as you stick to the early stages, there are more than 700 chapters in total. The early stage of recruiting disciples is a bit too long-winded, but the middle and late stages are okay, and the progress is not too slow. Although the plot is average, since it is a system text, the system is a bit too monotonous in terms of rewards. There are only a few things over and over again. In fact, the imagination can be more open to the system, but in any case, this is an invincible apprentice story, as long as you follow the main line and don't mess around, you can still read it! In summary, overall it's okay. The character creation and writing style need to be strengthened.
He is just a tool, with no opinion of his own at all. What left me speechless the most was that when we were dividing the fairy grass, Ah Rou didn't have it. The protagonist had taken away the entire Ice and Fire Eye, so would he still be missing Ah Rou's plant? Therefore, it can be seen that the protagonist is a pure tool man. After all, Ah Rou was the first to be with him, so there was no friendship at all? Quite speechless. Therefore, the protagonist just treats everyone as tools and has no true feelings! Of course, I was jumping to read it. If the protagonist gave it to Arou, but I missed it, my words would be equivalent to not saying it. If I really didn't give it, it would be what I said!
This is just to benefit yourself! If a disciple doesn't get any rewards at all, isn't he just a tool? I have seen a lot of systems for recruiting apprentices, but no matter what, there will always be rewards for apprentices. This is good, it's all rewards from the protagonist himself, and the apprentice gets nothing.
After watching it for so long, not a single woman was confiscated. As a time traveler, the system for you is a failure.
To be honest, the writing is average. To accept a disciple, you have to teach something. But judging from the ten or so chapters I've read so far, the rewards for accepting disciples have nothing to do with teaching disciples. They are all about improving the protagonist's personal abilities. Xiao Wu and Huo Wu may have become their disciples just because they saved their lives. Zhu Zhuqing may not be married yet, and he may not be hunted by his sister. He doesn't have any particular desire to become stronger just for the food. But Ye Lingling's purpose of becoming a disciple is very clear, it is because of his medicine, which is the water that dropped a drop of blood that day. At this time, I think it would be better if he was rewarded with a god-level medical skill.
I think the shadow that should be summoned at the beginning of the invincibility point has the strength of the God King.
A lot of the plots are so sloppy, it's the same as what I dreamed of. I really can't stand it anymore. I can't comment on whether it's good or bad later on, so I'll just give it a medium rating.
I've already read Chapter 295 and it's still level 19. I don't even know what to say. Is it the worst among fantasy fan novels? The system also gives some messy things.
I'm drunk after reading more than two hundred chapters and I haven't reached level 20 yet.
Anyway, Invincible is not a cool article