Pokemon: The Dragon-Type Champion

The four skills are completely poisonous points The author seems to be a newbie, so I just said it directly, this is the point of great poison. In actual combat, you can just write that both sides only use four skills or less, but don't say this out loud. It's okay if you don't say it, but it will be extremely poisonous if you say it out. Just like the animation, a battle basically consists of four skills, but the animation does not clearly explain the four skills. Many trainers also play skill development, such as turbid current, counterattack shield, etc.

Magikarp

The protagonist always loses in the early stage and is not easy to attract popularity. Dragon elves eat big resources, but you are still a poor person. The most unacceptable thing for me is that the official competition limit is four, which basically prohibits the creation of self-made moves. Also, your plug-in has no effect, or it is too late. I don't know if you can write it down.

Thank you all for reading my book. The four-skill restriction was originally intended to make combat more challenging. After thinking about it for the first time when writing a Pokémon fanfic, I decided to forget it and will change this skill restriction in the future. The protagonist has some difficulty in fighting because the Pokémon is very weak at the beginning. Goldfinger is more powerful in the later stage. I just want to write a story that slowly grows. I'm sorry.

Big Sister's Front Page Doron Baruto

How about adding a strange jaw dragon to the dragon team? After reading so many books, no one uses him. He is handsome and powerful, okay? The iron head feature is equipped with a double-edged headbutt to kill everything, but the speed is too fast

You need an early-stage pet. The Magikarp never evolves, and a multi-dragon in its early stage is useless. Without early-stage combat power, you can't complete any tasks. The quasi-god is a bit eye-catching. With this plug-in, you can slowly become stronger by picking up insects. If you still have some early-stage combat power, you can slowly complete tasks and make money. I don't know what you want to do now.

Although I have complained about this book in the comment area before, the author at least managed to complete the story from beginning to end, which is rare. I still support this kind of author. The genre of the book is already niche, making it even more rare. Let me summarize some points that I think are not very well written in this book. First, the fusion of world views between games and anime is not impossible, nor is it bad, but the author obviously did not write out the feeling of fusion. I originally wanted to be popular with fans on both sides, but in the end it seemed very ordinary. Xiaozhi's plot line was mainly like a head-licking feeling. Secondly, the main plot at the beginning is a little slow to advance. Some people are complaining that Gyarados evolves too slowly. I think it doesn't matter. The author has actually grasped the core and focus of the Pokémon world view in the early stage - the harmonious symbiosis of humans and Pokémon. The protagonist and Gyarados have experienced many breakthroughs and experiences and finally evolved. This is good, but many plots in the early stage can actually be skipped. For example, if you look back at the evolution of Magikarp in chapter 50, the plot of the multi-dragon will not affect the main line at all. It can be completely done many chapters later. The author can look back and see how many chapters the multi-dragon evolved and how much space it will occupy after the evolution of Gyarados. Third, the villain is average. In the end, the author realized that his villain, Adam, was not very well established. In the middle and later stages, the description was very strong, all kinds of darkness and power, but he did not spend a few more chapters to write about why this character is so dark. The villain's creation, to put it bluntly, has no sense of three-dimensionality. This kind of writing is not as good as strengthening the presence of Shui Wutong and Red Flame Pine in the mid-term. At least these two are in order to expand the land and the other to expand the ocean. They have sufficient villain reasons and power. And Adam, who rules the world at every turn, why does he rule? It can totally be sublimated. Fourth, the four-skill restriction and battle scenes are clichés that are often complained about, but I think this is not a problem. The four-skill restriction is originally biased towards games, and it goes back to what I just said. The two worlds are integrated, and you want to attract fans from both ends, but in the end you can't attract them. You can either write the four-skill restriction to the end. As for the battle scene, I think it is well written. Yes, it is well written, but I feel that the author may have been criticized often in the later period. The reason is that battle scenes are often skipped. Several main characters, such as the four-jawed needle dragon, are alien beasts after all. Almost all of them are skipped when they appear in the later stages. There are always multiple dragons dancing at high speeds, and ice and snow dragons dancing waltz. Because the main favorites and popular ones in the later period are multiple dragons. But how is this different from the anime journey where popularity declines and old characters and favorites return from time to time to attract fans? The more you can't understand the battle scenes, the more you have to write them. What is the most important thing in this worldview? Why do we like to see Xiaozhi yelling every day like a fool but still like it? Because what we love is the bond between humans and Pokémon in this worldview! This is a very good point that the author wrote during the middle period of his cooperation with Gyarados. But it was lost at a later stage, which is a pity. Fifth, in the later stage, I obviously felt that I could not grasp the structure of the world. The main plot became very chaotic once it passed the finals of the Hoenn Competition. Or maybe you are no longer in the mood to write and want to speed up the plot. The plot of many chapters feels very rushed, and some chapters are full of nonsense. In particular, there are many chapters where the protagonist's name can be typed incorrectly. I wonder where you copied it from. It's not that you are not allowed to copy it. Many people who write novels nowadays hire ghostwriters from studios to write their own names, such as a certain young man. But you have to review and review the text? Why not review it and let us readers pay for these typos and messy stuff in the end? This is very bad! So if you don't write well later, it's better to stop for a few days and think about it carefully. This is the reason why many novels start at the beginning and end at the end. The further you go, the harder it is to structure and control. Sixth, the heroine has no bright spots. This is actually not important. In fact, you don't even need to write the heroine. It is much better than Xiaoguang's appearance. Writing love lines is inherently difficult to control. Readers who like love lines may not be too fond of this. Neither the protagonist nor the heroine is thrilling. The love line does not have a particularly outrageous relationship. It is not so outrageous if you write a strong enemy and a girl who is stronger and constantly collides with the protagonist and finally falls in love with her through some things. Instead, you write Xiaoguang who feels very weak emotionally. This is a point that was not well written. Having said so much, let me talk about the author's writing. The life line is very good. The bond with Gyarados in the early stage, the daily life of the snow mountain and Pokémon are all very good. This is why I am willing to subscribe to the full book to support the author. Having said so much, I hope the author can see that although some words may be very serious, they are all from the heart. I have been reading novels since 2006, and I read them in all genres. It is because the subject matter of this book is niche, and the author persisted in finishing it despite the scumbag subscription, so he took the time to write such a long review. I just hope that the author can gradually improve his writing style and make some improvements in the future. After all, if you want to eat this rice, you still have to constantly improve yourself. Come on!

It's been a long time since anyone wrote about the Dragon King. I remember it was a long time ago when Pokemon cool articles were popular. At that time, basic quasi-gods, or popular Pokemon, the Three Sacred Birds, and Mewtwo were commonplace. Later, many authors suppressed it. Generally, they would not easily be accurate, but would instead make it a matter of qualifications. In fact, if there is no failure, the dragon type is the best. To be honest, if you have dragon in your name, there are basically few bad ones, even if you are not a dragon type. As for this book, except for the four skills, everything else is okay. Only four skills can really persuade me to quit. Looking at the fighting style of Gyarados and Duolong, I feel like those weak chicken elves of Xiaozhi. When fighting multiple dragons, just dodge quickly and then scratch them repeatedly. Gyarados is just like the fighting type. It repeatedly emphasizes impact, and the only water type skill you see is water wave... (Water Tail, Dragon Tail, Destruction Death Ray, Three Teeth, etc., Don't you know one? Some are just the most basic skills of Gyarados.) Maybe the author just played the game, and is not as familiar with many skill descriptions as some authors. Hope it improves.

Doron Baruto