Hogwarts' Druid Master

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Well, as someone who has read at least 100 novels (probably), I would like to express my opinion on this book (just a personal point of view, if there are any differences of opinion. Feel free to comment peacefully. But don't criticize). As a fan novel, the subject matter of this book is quite novel. The main character is a cat, not a human. The biggest problem in non-human novels like this is how to get rid of human thinking and behavior and describe the non-human protagonist from a first-person perspective. I have to praise the author for really controlling the cat's mind and behavior very well. On the surface, the entire novel is about the protagonist Fish's experiences and stories in Hogwarts, or in the Potter era. In fact, if you dig deeper, it is the process of transforming from a beast into a human. It can be seen that the author is very proficient in the use of emojis. The expressions used in the novel articles cannot be said to be none, but only very few, but they often have a little eye-catching effect. Furthermore, because the protagonist is a cat, the expressions are naturally not as rich as those of a human being. The emojis naturally help us better imagine the story situation and integrate into the story. The wording is also good, and the emotions are conveyed very well. It really reminds us of the cute image of cats. The Druid setting also stood out to me. Because most Hogwarts fans rely on their own strength, few show a strong connection with nature. Well, there is a sense of wonder that Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them gave me when it first came out. Having said that, let's talk about the shortcomings. Let's talk about writing techniques first: 1. Too many emojis are used. As I said before, emojis do have some eye-catching effects. But that doesn't mean it can be used all the time. It's like a surprise, and there are many more surprises. It just feels like plastic. 2. The use of emojis is sometimes inappropriate. The most obvious one is in combat. Most of the famous novels, such as Zhetian, Perfect World, Dragons, etc., Often have grand battle scenes, or the heroic and skillful characters impress us deeply. Ahem, that's too far off topic. Of course, some of what I said does not apply to the author's novels. But we cannot deny the pleasure this writing method brings us. For me, I prefer a kitten that is like a tiger, tall and mighty, as powerful as a bamboo, looking down on the people, like a king of nature suppressing the opponent. Instead of showing us cuteness through emojis during battle. Wrong time and wrong expression will only bring a bad experience. I hope the author can correct it. Then there's the content. 1. The identity of the Druid was not well expressed. The affinity of cats is very good, and the cute image almost overflows the surface. But as a son or king of nature, I think it would be better to have some majestic and sacred feeling. Fantastic animals will indeed be close to the protagonist, but it should be more of awe. If you only write affinity, it will be difficult to express the identity of the druid. After all, magic can also control plants and summon animals. Perhaps you would say that the degree of control is different. Yes, it's different. But there is no special feeling of druid. Of course, I don't deny that you performed very well in some areas, such as Yue Yu. Why is a sense of awe needed? For example, the protagonist goes to Hermione's house as a guest and is chased by a large group of animals while out playing. This gave me a weird feeling, like a star being chased by ardent fans. In fact, it's not that you can't write, but don't be too outrageous. But if the story is about the protagonist passing by, wouldn't it be more impressive for the animals to salute (personal understanding, if you don't think so, just pretend I didn't say it). Second, as I said before, this story digs deep into the transformation of animals into humans. In fact, the author didn't write much. The protagonist was at most an 8 or 9-year-old human child. I don't know what the author's purpose is in writing a book, but I think there is no author who doesn't want to be famous. The key to being famous is to have readers recall your book. How to have a memorable aftertaste is to have a certain depth so that readers will have a different feeling after reading it twice or three times. I say that the subject matter for readers is very good because it can delve deeply into the simplicity of cats and the complexity of human nature. The strong contrast will definitely lead to big articles to be written. But unfortunately, the author does not seem to realize that this is just how to express the cuteness and innocence of cats and children. Yes, it's not impossible. Cuteness and innocence are necessary processes for transformation and growth, but they are not everything! The cuteness written by the author runs throughout the whole text. It really shines in the early stage, but then it just feels like plastic. 3. The character's behavior is illogical. The most obvious one is the love between the protagonist and Hermione. I don't delve into the issue of reproductive isolation. Because this is a fantasy novel, you can write it unreasonably and boldly. But that's not what I'm talking about, it's the character's behavior. I said, fantasy novels don't have to follow logic, but! I'm not asking you to jump out of human logic. What kind of man do you think can find a girlfriend by being cute? Or one of the most beautiful women? Have you ever seen someone actually treat a cat as a companion? Cuteness is a bonus, not a deciding factor! What's more, if Hermione wants to break the biggest barrier between humans and animals, cats and cats need a stronger attraction. You may not be convinced, then you can go and find out if anyone has married a cat? Cute, yes, but not enough! You must write an attractive point that attracts readers to be moved by it, then you will succeed. This is in line with human logic. Then if you say that the protagonist is a cat, then Hermione is not a human? Is she a cat's logic? 4. The character's character has not grown, which is similar to the second point. I won't say much more. Indeed, character growth is difficult to control. I can understand that, after all, people are complex. But there can't be no changes at all. Maomao has understood a lot of truths. Understanding the truth is just a foil, and growth is the main thing. It's difficult to write, so I just change it bit by bit. You might think this is cat logic and doesn't require much transformation. Then let me ask you, if you can't even change basic human nature, how can Hermione break that barrier. Fifth, and following the fourth, the character's personality changes little by little, and the change must encounter some things, which can be big or small. There can be no small things, but there must be no big things (commonly known as the knife). The author didn't have the heart to give the cat a knife. Of course we don't like knives, but we can't deny that the strong emotions brought by knives deeply tug at our hearts and make us think about them over and over again. This is difficult to calm down. Our difficulty in predicting the development of the story means that we remember the story. Due to the word limit, that's all I'll write. Author, your subject matter is really good. But I also hope you can write better. Come on, I look forward to seeing better works from you

It can be said to be a rare and good-looking HP fanfic. After all, kittens are always the cutest, but in the end, they overcame reproductive isolation, which is a bit like this and that. But just looking at the front is quite good.

It would be good if you can accept the blood-pressure-raising behavior of the protagonist in the early stage. The main part of the plot is a relaxed group pet type. Although the protagonist grew up in the end, he did not fully grow up. There are a lot of kaomoji characters, which reflect the cuteness of cats, and there are also a lot of water characters. The emotional drama is so-so. Due to the affinity of the protagonist in the setting, almost everyone likes the protagonist. However, it is also this setting that makes Hermione, the heroine, not special. It feels like anyone can be this heroine. The protagonist's child's character makes the emotional interactions not worth watching.

All I can say about this book is that my cerebellum shrank. The first picture of The Man Who Lived, I thought it was the protagonist. Then I felt really confused at the time. I couldn't stand it anymore, or I didn't understand it.

It's a book that has a gradual change in my perception (it's good enough to be okay), but I think it's well written, but the animal affinity is a bit outrageous, and there is a strange sense of dissonance when watching the plot related to the heroine Hermione and cats (?) The emojis are used very casually and very frequently, and isn't it a cloud-sucking cat? I always dislike the heroine (she takes away my power from my cat!) Summary: It's a very cute article, but I personally think it's a little weird (a little bit). If you want to read a more enjoyable article, just pass it. Question: Was there really a TV channel where you could watch movies in the UK at that time? It's the part where I go to Hermione's house and watch TV at night. Request: Can the author write a book on the same subject? Want to see awa

Just look good and that's it

The protagonist in the back is forced to become wise. He is simply not stupid.

Trust your own vision and don't decide whether a book is good or bad just because of book reviews. Life is like a box of multi-flavored chocolates. You never know what the next piece will taste like.

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