Dragon Tribe: Dragon of Eternal Time

Wonderful opening Lack of coherent plot Until the unexpected ending Summary: It's better to stop updating if it's unfinished

It's a novice novel, and it's a pretty average novice novel. I don't know what it's like to get 7.8 Billion on the card, and I don't know what it's like for a freshman to pretend to be a slap in the face, but it looks really weird. I feel that he has depth and connotation, and it doesn't feel like he's pretending to be a slap in the face. The whole book feels strange to me. The following is the original text. "I think they won't be able to pass the rating test tomorrow. They can't resonate with the 'Emperor'. Maybe the principal made a mistake and misjudged their level." Someone left a message. "That Mo Shi was just a coward who kept dodging. He obviously relied on Lu Mingfei's dark gun to defeat Caesar and Chu Zihang." Some people were dissatisfied. "Their biggest specialty is e-sports? Can this thing slay a dragon? It's ridiculous!" Someone mocked

The writing is very good, and it fills in some of the pitfalls of the sword. The protagonist is an eternal time dragon from another world, which is very unique. After killing the White Queen, the plot sped up significantly, and finally ended in a hurry during the decisive battle with the King of Ocean and Water. This is the biggest shortcoming of this book.

Don't look at it, it's a mess

Destroys the originality, the writing is mediocre

Uh, what do you mean by bad ending?

No, buddy, are you done?

What are you writing? Let me go. The writing is poor, the writing is simple and unfinished, and there are many typos. Can you see for yourself, the author, that some of the sentences make sense? Several girls also have an inexplicable liking for the protagonist. If you can't write about emotions well, don't write about it.

It's so beautiful, can you add some details? Just an ellipsis and that's it.

Fine