Zhutian: Sign in to Become a Soul Beast a Hundred Thousand Years in Advance

Shit, a piece of shit. All I can say about the first ten chapters is that the foreshadowing is very good, the plot writing and the emotions are very well done. As a result, the next chapter turned out to be bullshit. I endured it and read a few more chapters. I couldn't stand it any longer. It was so mindless. Why, even if I changed people, I should just continue with AI.

The protagonist is a scumbag (")! He was so strong and invincible at the beginning, but what happened! 😓! He even cut off his account and rebuilt it, which is really useless! Just fix it, and still flirt with him everywhere, scumbag! 👎

This article is finished from Chapter 10. The rest of it is boring and the system is so rubbish that it still gets stuck even when the year comes. I thought it was an article about the Invincible System, but it's nothing. It's written in a mess.

The first part was okay, but the second part was useless. Zhizhi, you can write it to death, but it's not necessary. Then let her live alone later. So what does the protagonist's original letting go mean? Changing the number later can be regarded as a back-up. As a result, you have to recognize a father. Your power is so huge that there are more hundred thousand year soul beasts than the Star Dou Forest. You also have laws that can be hidden. If it doesn't work, you still have the elves, why do you have to recognize a father? At one point, you described how strong the main character is, but it turns out that you have to wait for the Tang San plot. You are a fan, which is understandable, so you shouldn't write it so strong. Generally speaking, the negative impact of your prequels is greater than nothing. It makes your novel a big problem. Of course, it also has problems with your conception. Moreover, there are basic problems when you write it. Even I, who have only read a little bit of Douluo, know this.

Personally, I think it's okay, but the ending is too hasty. The foreshadowing is good, but there are also many unreasonable things in the article. If the process is better written, the logic is clearer, and the branch line is extended, it will be better.

With the knife at the beginning, what is the main point to express? To write the heroine to death, to be spiritual is to be reborn, and then to live a tragic life? Your mother, it would be better to just die, die early and be freed early. You still let her live and live in tragedy. This your mother is worthy of being a brother to Tang San. Her head is abnormal. This tauren, with such abnormal outlook on life, is worthy of being a Douluo. I am speechless.

I didn't know. I thought you were writing the Invincible drama. I only found out after watching it that you were writing it now. I didn't even know that you started 100,000 years in advance. I thought it was very strong. But the next one is You Go to the Holy Soul Village. It's called Recognizing Father.

I'm convinced. Is the author a Tongren? The foreshadowing is very good. I don't even know what the 11 chapters of He Meow are about. I was so scared that I gave up immediately.

Very pretty! Even though I have a knife, give it to me!

I had finished reading this book a long time ago, but someone else gave me a thumbs up. I came in to read it again, only to realize that I had not rated it yet.