Born in Qingyu Year at the Beginning

The logic is very confusing. At the beginning, the protagonist seemed to have known that he had a system. He failed every day, and Fan Xian looked like a time traveler, so he practiced martial arts hard since he was a child in order to be able to protect himself. When he went to Kyoto, he had to hold a competition. What kind of swordsmanship in Huashan? If you let the warriors from all over the world come together to compete, what would the court think of you? They thought it was modern.

The author himself was confused when writing. There were many typos. Fan Xian and Fan You couldn't be distinguished for a while. Fan Xian became Fan You after writing. Basically, there were only one typo in several paragraphs. It was impossible to read. The identity of the character was different from the original work. Sigu Jian was written as Yun Zhilan's apprentice. He was simply a rebellious disciple.

There are so many typos that I can't stand it at all, so I'll give up.

1. There are many typos throughout the article. 2. The first one or two hundred chapters are completely copied from the original plot, except that he added a protagonist who he wrote himself. 3. It's verbose, the word count is low, and the context and logic is not very clear.

Got it, big typos

The first point is that there are too many typos, and the second point is that I completely adapted Qing Yunian's writing style, just added a character, and there is nothing interesting in the follow-up. I only read a dozen chapters, there are too many typos, I just added a character and a plot, it's like drawing a snake and licking a pair of feet, it's just as bad

The writing style is like that of an elementary school student, and the protagonist has many flaws. They are all written by the time-traveler Fan Xian, who is a fool and is transparent.

To be honest, since it is written by a fan, the most basic outline setting should be roughly in line with the original novel. As for the plot trend, the magic change will not have much impact. At least it can be seen. The result was the first one to collapse. The author even thought that Ye Qingmei was really Fan Jian and even wrote that Fan Ruoruo and Ye Qingmei were almost identical. It was so funny that Emperor Qing was so generous? It's true. Even when he was a child, Fan Jian was killed by the Nine Tribes long ago. But anyone who has watched a few episodes of the TV series and has some intelligence can see that Fan Xian and Emperor Qing have an unusual relationship. It's okay to change the plot. After all, they are the same people. Your special outline is hard-coded, which is also a big deal. Since it is all hard-coded, why not change the title of the book, and then change the name of the main character in the book. You can do whatever you want, right?

Ever since Emperor Qing exposed the Tiger Guard, it has been a mess. There is no end to the ruthlessness, and the other women in the back have no feeling (too rushed, just a few chapters). Li Sili in the main world has no sense of existence... I can only say it is a mess💩

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