People Are Robbing Tombs and Scratching the Ground to Numb the Rice Dumplings.

Good-looking is good-looking. It's just that the update is too slow

Personally, I think it's not bad, the progress is not slow, and I'm not instantly invincible.

The storyline is very attractive but updates are too slow

It feels like just a quick tour. The protagonist just signs in at one place and then rushes to the next. After signing in, he goes home to sell antiques, and then goes to rob tombs to sign in. The emotional writing is not very delicate. He says he doesn't like them, then hooks up with them, and then says he doesn't like them. It's hypocritical and disgusting. And as a time traveler, can he really have such a deep relationship with Hu Bayi and the others?

To be honest, I was really surprised at the beginning. I can't say that Qian Donkey is exhausted now, but author, how do you want to write? The time-travel copy is very good, but I don't have the writing style. I hope you don't write randomly. After all, you can learn from the work of Fengshen, which is enough for you to survive. If you write randomly, you will be scolded.

To be honest, the author's description of the protagonist reveals hypocrisy between the lines, and the plot seems to be coherent. However, in order to continue the plot, the protagonist is deliberately made to forget the original plot, which is really unexpected.

Very good

So-so, mindless recommendation (I don't care about this), but the character of the protagonist is not interesting. If you can't write about tomb robbing, you can write about things other than tomb robbing to increase the interest. For example, let the country study special things, which is good, or cooperate with the country to dig graves! ! ! ! ! Anyway, you have a space ring, so you won't be unable to get anything.

It's so good. Can the author write a tomb robbing note next time?

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