I’m No Menace

The male protagonist is quite strong, but he has endured to an aggrieved situation. He doesn't retaliate when he is insulted, and he doesn't fight back when he is slapped. Moreover, the male protagonist has too many things to do, and the writing feels very messy.

Why do I feel like my writing is so messy now?

The first 300 chapters were written around Xiaoya, then the 200 chapters were about another woman after Xiaoya disappeared, and then a few hundred chapters later Xiaoya came back, and then they were written around the third woman. I thought it was a harem story, but the more I read, the more confusing it became. Anyway, it's right that you can't do without women, but the protagonist also shows a straight male personality and doesn't love anyone. If you don't, why would you write the plot around women? 😓

It created a holy mother and the protagonist. He didn't kill anyone who should be killed. He had to kill a few of his own people before killing him. There was so much nonsense.

The first few chapters are okay, just don't let the end suck.

I can bear to see the front part. When writing the emotional part of the protagonist. Look at what's written. The more I watch, the more troubled I become. Author, you must have watched too many TV series. What a waste of talent like you if you don't make TV. I really can't stand it anymore.

It's pretty good, but not popular. The subject matter is novel and the content is interesting. It's better than 50% to 60% of novels.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. I don't like the Minotaur plot the most. It always makes the heroine have a boring experience with other men, which is annoying to watch.

It was fine at first, but a walk-on villain just took advantage of the heroine's amnesia to take care of her. I was really convinced. I can't stand it anymore.

To be honest, the first part is really good, but the second part is almost nothing interesting. It's a bit disgusting and hard to understand. I don't recommend reading it.