NBA: The Peak Shark, Ruling the Paint!

It was good at first, but then I wrote more and more fight scenes, and I thought it was running out of time. Isn't this a basketball novel? It turned out that we were carrying a ball during a fight. Fighting was the main thing and playing ball was secondary. I was speechless =_=

The first part of the plot was okay, but I really couldn't stand it in the middle and later parts. Moreover, the author wrote random data, characters, and teams, and often wrote 58 shots. Without any ink, he would write one or two hundred or two 58 shots every few dozen chapters. The rest was good. I couldn't help but write this all the time.

Each game is written in too much detail, and the above and below are seriously inconsistent. The above still says a two-game ban, but the following is a one-game ban. And the author doesn't understand that era at all

The writing is messy, the player who wrote it is off the court, and the players who were off the court without substitutions or timeouts are on the court again.

Apart from basketball, there are no female stars in basketball, not even in daily life. After playing this game, it's the next day's court in a blink of an eye.

The system is invisible throughout the whole process, fighting all the time. Whoever is caught is being fucked. Either in the fight or on the way to fight. The only basketball skills are dunking → being flagrantly fouled → fighting → fined → infinite loop.

The further it goes, the more chaotic it becomes, copying and pasting repeated plots, confusing plot characters, things in the 90s, Chapter 266, Sloan fucking stood up from the Clippers bench, what the hell, and then the protagonist passed the ball to Neptune? What is all this mess?

To be honest, the author wanted to write a refreshing article, but his skill was not enough. Instead, it made the readers feel uncomfortable, half-satisfied, and uncomfortable.

Are you a eunuch?