I Am Both Immortal and Mortal

The pace is too slow. After listening to 7 chapters, I haven't entered the fairy gate yet. The fish and shrimp plot at the beginning is adapted from the story of rebirth in the rural era. There is nothing wrong with it. The writing is smooth and the sentences are fluent. It just rambles on about the mortal plot without getting to the main point.

The more I write, the more intelligent I become. If you don't know how to write emotional lines, I suggest you don't write them. Instead of forcing a plot to be touching and sensational. What "I will help you even if I sacrifice myself for my brother", if you didn't tell me, I would have thought it was the finale and you are only a third of the way through.

This book makes people immersed in it and explores the new world bit by bit.

This novel is well written!

I really like this book, but I think the rating is low.

Vicious, just to restore the scene of a poem, you wrote A Chou to death, and let's go with the flow. You deliberately arranged it, and with the help of immortal cultivators, you also let others die. What a waste, you can't save a mortal.

The author always likes to explain things by force. He was originally a third-rate author, but his has become a second-rate author.

The writing behind it is not good

You can take a look at the front. After forming the elixir, it doesn't look good. One moment it turns into a turtle, the next moment it's a seafood meeting and a seafood war. I gave it up decisively.

It is not recommended for newcomers to read the author's book. 1. It's a bit sadistic, but it's not as brilliant as Dragon Clan and Huangtian Emperor. 2. It's a little involved, and this kind of involvement is between Shuangwen.