I've Found the Right Way to Use Proficiency

This novel is an explanatory text on cultivating immortality! No matter the details! Every time a pig's trotter sneezes, he has to write hundreds of words to explain why he sneeze, what it means, why others don't sneeze, and what are the benefits of sneezing with a pig's trotter!

What a mess of a novel! Abandon books

Generally, the articles on cultivating immortals are all chronicles. This one has no main line, which results in it turning into a ppt and the plot is broken.

Boring

If you like it plain, you can continue watching. The main character lacks any sense of urgency and is just bland.

It's so embarrassing to watch, so inexplicable

I saw a lot of titles that were very funny, and I immediately lost the mood to read any more.

What's his son's name? Why did I suddenly have a grandson?

It doesn't look good, has no soul, and has no outline.

It's like there is no outline, just write whatever comes to mind. Then the plot had no ups and downs and no points of interest, it was too bland.