Taking on Missions, Starting with Swallowed Star

After devouring fans, you are the only one left in my bookshelf. I originally had a sword, but it's a pity that Hanhan's writing was too stingy. Virtual Universe Company is like a beggar.

Complain about it After reading a lot of Devouring fandoms, you will find that they have a common problem - the strong people of the tribe are always in shock, and they are all shocked at the protagonist. Every time the protagonist does something, there will be a strong person who will shock him, which can reflect how strong, talented and shocking the protagonist is. Normally strong people maintain their own identity, plus they have lived for a long time and are well-informed, and their mood swings should not be particularly strong unless it is a matter of life and death or due to their own personality. The fan author has no other way of describing the protagonist's strength from the side. It is easy to write them in such a way that they are shocked and shocked. The strong person does not look like a strong person, but like a group of grandma Liu who just entered the Grand View Garden.

I saw a Dou Po Chui, let me tell everyone to avoid the pit

The novel Earth Swallowed Starry Sky is the pinnacle of the novel "The Battle of Geniuses", and then it starts to go downhill. Personally, I feel that the later chapters are difficult to write. One of the reasons is that the calculation of combat power is easy to write down, and the other is to enter the virtual universe company, the growth route, and the machine selection is just that. You can write some of your own ideas, but it cannot surpass the original work, which makes it boring to watch!

I want to know, the author, how you will solve the problem after the earth is found out by the overlords of the universe? You must know that Hong did not remind Luo Feng after he knew in advance that the special characteristics of the earth were exposed, and he did not even fart. This is a fact (Hong was a disciple of Giant Ax at that time). How would you solve this problem, author? Kill them directly or something? (Luo Feng was a disciple of City Lord Hun and was still forced to give up his right to live in most of the earth.) Moreover, the earth at that time was bullied by the cosmic people who were also the main camp of mankind for a long time. Hong still didn't fart. (I forgot the specific details! It seems!) To be honest, when I read the original work, I really wanted to kill all the powerful cosmic humans and wipe out their tribe. What would you write, author? There is no need for the author to reveal specific details. As long as the author can give a sentence, can you prevent this from happening? ? If you don't let this happen, you can only kill him and threaten them to stop it. It's useless, because the Chaos City Lord at that time couldn't make them compromise. Can you, the author? Otherwise, this would be a big poisonous point, because the protagonist knew the plot and still let it happen to him. What else could it be if it wasn't a poisonous point?

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I feel that the quality of the plot starting from the chessboard of heaven and earth has dropped by more than one level. The description and performance of the protagonist are a bit childish, and the word "um" pops up at every turn, as well as the "Invincible Hot Wheels", and the performance of the cosmic sea later, especially the sentence "The three-eyed ancestor god An dares to bully me" It made me laugh. The main rhythm of the cosmic sea is to fight for treasures. Do you think you have been to every house? In the original work, what was Luo Feng's performance like when he entered the cosmic sea and was pursued by the Lord of the Five Huns? Respond calmly, be able to escape, but not escape. The clone dragged Wu Hun to death. Afterwards, he just regarded it as a normal thing and prepared to kill Wu Hun later when he had the strength. Wu Hun's description was also very normal. It was just a fight. There would be no inexplicable sulking and funny actions. And what about the protagonist? Inexplicably, he believed in the three-eyed ancestor god. After being used to block the gun, he hid in the ancient god's space and sulked. He slapped the chair and said, "How dare the three-eyed ancestor god bully me?" And his subordinates also agreed? Is this what a strong person should do? This is the way to write a mentally retarded male protagonist in a palace fighting drama, and it is extremely dramatic when used here. Even if it is simpler to directly write about the protagonist using the ancient god space to take advantage of the two true gods, it feels better than adding these side descriptions. The writing style of this book is very different from before to later. The strong style in the front is completely lost in the back. I don't know whether the author let himself go or someone else changed the story. The protagonist behaves relatively calmly in the front, but in the back he looks like an adventure story for a "high school student" (that may be an exaggeration, but it makes me feel like the male protagonist of a Japanese comic high school student). The character creation has not kept up with the progress of the copy, and the thinking mode has not kept up with the progress of his own strength.

In Swallowing the Starry Sky, only the Earth chapter is okay, but the other chapters are boring

Personally, I think Hong's cultivation talent is obviously a level higher than that of Luo Feng himself. He cultivated the field on his own at the planet level with almost no external systematic education. He is simply a monster. Thor is very good and has better talent than Luo Feng. In fact, you can focus on investing in the three of them, not just Luo Feng. Since they are the same person, they can give Hong and Lei Shen all the opportunities that Luo Feng has, such as clones, encounters in secret realms, secret books, chaos tablets, powerful teachers, etc., And I believe that their achievements will not be worse than Luo Feng.

I have long wanted to complain about the protagonist's title of Lord of the Universe. The god is called the Ancient Lord. Isn't it better to just call him the Ancient God? Although the title of the Lord of the Universe is the Lord of xx, it is not necessarily the case. There is no mandatory rule in this regard. Aren't Emperor Yan, the Lord of Chaos City, and Luo Feng's Galaxy Lord an example?