Taking on Missions, Starting with Swallowed Star

Of all the fanfiction I've read, only "You're the Last One on My Bookshelf" remains. I also had "Battle Blade," but that idiot wrote it so stingily, making the Virtual Universe Company look like a beggar.

Let me rant If you've read a lot of Devouring fanfiction, you'll notice they all have one thing in common—the powerful members of the clan are always in shock, always looking at the protagonist with various expressions of astonishment. Every time the protagonist does something, a powerful figure has to come and shock him to show how strong, how talented, and how astonishing the protagonist is.

I saw a fan of "Battle Through the Heavens" (斗破), so I'm mentioning it to warn others to avoid this pitfall.

The novel *Swallowed Star* fanfiction, Earth is the essence of the genius battle, which is the peak. After that, it started to decline. I personally think that the reason why it was difficult to write later is that the calculation of combat power is easy to break. Another reason is that when you enter the virtual universe company, the growth path and the selection are the same.

I want to know, author, how will you handle the situation after those cosmic overlords find out about Earth? It's a fact that Hong knew beforehand about Earth's special nature being exposed, but didn't warn Luo Feng, or even utter a single word (at that time, Hong was a disciple of the Giant Axe). How will you handle this? Will you simply wipe them out or something?

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I feel that the quality of the plot dropped by more than one level after the Heaven and Earth Chessboard. The protagonist's description and performance became a bit childish, with him constantly uttering the word "uh," and then there's that "Invincible Wind and Fire Wheel," and his performance when he ventured into the Cosmic Sea.

Only the Earth chapter of Swallowed Star was decently written; the other chapters were dull and uninteresting.

Personally, I think Hong's cultivation talent is clearly a level above Luo Feng's. He cultivated a domain at the planetary level with almost no external systematic education; he's practically a prodigy. Thor is also quite good, and his talent surpasses Luo Feng's. Actually, we could focus our investment on these three characters instead of just Luo Feng.

I've wanted to complain about the protagonist's title of "Lord of the Universe" for a long time. What the hell is this "Lord of the Ancients"? Why not just call him "Ancient God"? Although the title of "Lord of the Universe" is "Lord of XX", it's not always the case. There are no mandatory rules in this regard. Aren't Yan Emperor, Chaos City Lord, and Luo Feng's "Galaxy Lord" examples?