
Zhu Xian Immortal Story
诛仙长生传
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Anime & ACG
- Subgenre
- ACG Fanfiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qimao
Stats
All-time: Popularity, Must-read votes.
412Chapters
591kPopularity
1.3kReaders
2.5kMust-read votes
8.9Score
952Ratings
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Is it okay to be normal? To be honest, what I wrote in Dazhu Peak was okay, but what I wrote when I came out to experience it was really bad. I went down the mountain without thinking about improving my strength, and ran out to visit the brothels. I couldn't walk when I saw a woman. Especially when I wrote about Baguio, I completely turned into a licking dog, licking non-stop. Is it interesting? I was overcome with embarrassment when I saw it. You can say that you like Baguio's character and personality, and pursue it normally. But if you look at the character of the protagonist, he has no characteristics at all. He is as brainless as a retard, and he is also very useless. How can you say that strength is the foundation of everything? You don't want to improve your strength, but forcefully pretend to be awesome. Only then can you become a master. Clear the fourth floor, even if there are other characters from Bangzi Blood Training Hall who have practiced for hundreds of years, you can touch any character. You are trying to pretend to be realistic. The key to picking up girls is that your other female characters have no character traits at all. I really couldn't stand it after reading the first 80 chapters or so. I originally wanted to watch the Seven Meridians Martial Arts, but it was too lame.
It's really not that good so far. The protagonist is completely courageous and without any plan. He has no strength yet, can't walk when he sees a woman, and his IQ is never online. Except for the writing style which doesn't look like a beginner's, this book is just a mess💩.
In fact, I just want to make up for Baguio's regret, you are now a stallion and starting a harem😓
The original work of Zhu Xian is indeed very cruel. It is really touching to see that the author wants to write a Zhu Xian that belongs to everyone and is perfect and leaves no regrets. But after I wrote it, my feeling changed. I accepted Lu Xueqi, Tian Linger, and Baguio, and I felt it was excusable. I didn't expect that later on, I didn't expect anyone to accept a beautiful woman regardless of human relations... After resurrecting Baguio, I feel like the whole article has no direction.
It's so good-looking, and the quality can be called Zhang Wei Tudou level.
It's really a piece of cake
There is a reason why no one
Half of them are talking about women. Have you never seen a woman? I saw a woman with fair skin and a beautiful figure. I really
I really don't like how the simple Zhang Xiaofan is portrayed as a swinger.
It's too noisy, the protagonist's character is uncomfortable to watch