Douluo Dalu: Protecting Our Spirit Hall

It was good at first, but it got worse as the writing progressed. The protagonist looked like a pug version of Teddy, licking every one he saw. The writing is even more disgusting than the image of Tang San. The advantage is that the relationship with Bibi Dong is well described, and I feel that it would be much better if other women wrote less of the whole book. Overall it's a bit long-winded and the plot is slow. Personally, I feel that the protagonist is relatively merciful. He is a holy son, and when others scold him, he simply beats him up.

This book is quite well written, but the foreshadowing is too long, and the line to fully integrate the harem is too long. It has about one or two hundred chapters, and it starts to get better after about 300 or 300 chapters. Come on, author, the writing is quite good.

There is only one core point in the whole story: stand in the Spirit Hall camp, protect shortcomings without thinking, suppress and argue against Tang San's protagonist group throughout the whole process, and all the plots revolve around this single purpose. There is no ingenious plot concept or reasonable logical foreshadowing. The time travel, upgrades, and plot changes are all based on routines. The excitement is blunt and deliberate, and the plot is completely made up to cater to the camp preferences of some readers. . The character creation is weak, and all members of Wuhundian were forcibly put on whitewash filters. . The complexity and controversy in the original work were erased, making it one-sided and stereotyped; the characters in the original work were distorted and collapsed, only to set off the "correctness" of the protagonist and the "innocentness" of Wuhundian, without any character growth or human portrayal. The plot has neither emotional tension nor beauty of writing, let alone any depth of thought. All you can see is sloppy emotional drama. . Summary: A standard fast-food style fanfic. The most important thing is that the male protagonist is promiscuous. (The heroine has passed double digits) Simplify women's thinking

The book is still interesting, but there are too many dialogues. If you say you want to read it, then read it. If you don't want to read it, then don't read it. Every time I see a woman talking, there are seven or eight of them. It doesn't matter if I read it once, but it's annoying if I read it too much.

First of all, let me tell other book friends that it is a waste of time to pass the time and not read it. I am not saying that the author is not good at writing, but it is really a waste of time. I read Chapter 349 and the protagonist is twelve or thirteen years old. Tang San seems to be six or seven years old. When he was in Shrek Academy, he was only at level 25. What could Tang San do? Without the chance, Tang San was just a twin martial spirit. The protagonists were already at level 50 and almost 60. Tang San was still having sex with the rabbit. If you really feel that you have more time, just watch it. I was speechless and ran to read the bad reviews. I saw someone commented that Chapter 500 has not yet started the soul master competition, so I came to comment. Otherwise, I am afraid that I will be kept in the dark. If I don't say it, I will give up and watch.

I feel that the author has a lot of resentment towards the original work, and he always makes mistakes. Even if the original work is indeed hypocritical, this book also uses the Douluo template, tsk tsk tsk, True Six. .

It's too boring. The plot has stretched to more than 500 chapters, but the soul master competition hasn't started yet??? There's nothing to say about the protagonist's harem (it's so much that I can't bear to see each other and fall in love with each other) Also, many characters have lost their personalities, such as Zhu Zhuqing, Qian Renxue and so on.

There is too much foreshadowing and too little role for the protagonist. Many readers of the plot simply don't care that the author has to spend a lot of time describing it. Don't copy a lot of the original content. It should be streamlined. The harem is kept in a grinding pace, and Bibi Dong's emotional line is written well. I know the foreshadowing is not watery, but there are too many and it is annoying to watch. Also, don't give the girl a bad job. No one cares about the emotional drama of the supporting characters.

The character portrayal is too poor. The protagonist has the image of a wretched villain. He is afraid that his psychological activities will be extremely wretched. He does not dare to open a harem openly, but all he does is open a harem. After finishing his psychological activities, he finds a bunch of reasons to convince himself that he is a pure wretched villain. Besides, the character's name is the same as that of Douluo. The character of each character is far different from that of Douluo. Can Ghost say something like "This elder thinks highly of you"? And although the strength of the protagonist is said to be very strong based on the paper data, the full text does not have the feeling of a strong person at all, there is no momentum at all, and the word count is extremely low. I often read it for half a day without progressing the plot at all. I can write about it for a long time while walking on the road, changing from carriage to carriage, walking and then back to carriage. I like to describe the inner drama of the character and then give the protagonist a bunch of words to describe an extremely vulgar image of someone who likes to act in inner drama.

Originally everything was fine up to now, although the settings were a bit overdone and some places made me feel a little nauseous, but overall it was okay. Chapter 199 was completely disgusting to me, so you have to force me to drag it on, right? What about adulthood? I will go to your uncle's adulthood. After the age of 12 in Douluo Continent, that is adulthood. Your family has to be eighteen years old to become an adult? That's a developmental problem! Having said that, I will continue to talk about the question. Ever since I left Wuhun Palace at the age of 10, I have been preparing to go to Tiandou City to see Qian Renxue. What happened? It's been a year! You made Qian Renxue wait for a whole year, and what are you doing? Let's not talk about dealing with Tang San, that's business, Huo Wu? Is Qian Renxue more important or Huo Wu? What a real talent. He completely broke my defense.