A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: I, Li Feiyu, Cultivate with Attributes!

To be honest, the writing from the beginning to the sea of ​​​​random stars is very good, and it can be seen that the author has put his heart into it. Later, when I went to Jin Dynasty, I wrote about nothing but fighting and killing every day, and I couldn't do anything serious anymore. I don't even practice my natal magic weapon, so I rely on invisible needles and ancient treasures to conquer the world. Practice it early and warm it up early. The wood-based exercises were somewhat useful at first, but later they became just tools for providing mana, including other metal-based and fire-based exercises, which had no magical powers and were simply made up of the five elements. Seeing that it's just jumping from chapter to chapter, I can't stand more than 480 chapters.

Unsatisfactory, why do you provoke so many women of Han Laomo without interest? Is it because you, a person with Tianlinggen, provoked the cause and effect of a Dao Ancestor?

The Nascent Soul stage looked okay before, but after that it was basically invincible. Every episode was because, so, so. After arriving at Kunwu Mountain, he was chased by the Yuanying stage again. The bear demon in the Yuanying stage escaped and ran away for 5 miles. It was like a joke. Didn't he escape for hundreds of miles? It's the same as second-rate martial arts later.

It's all a random change, and the plot keeps developing unchanged, which makes no sense.

It's a systematic novel based on a mortal world view, and the timeline also follows the original mortal. As a result, the protagonist is actually more eunuch than Han Laomo. He only managed to win one Xin Ruyin in the Chaotic Star Sea. The other female characters are all air. If you don't have a harem with mortals, what's the point of reading fan fiction? Do you think your beep surpasses the original work? I saw Barbarian Beard swallowing the magic power of the sky, wasting so much of my time, with systematic slurs, rubbish.

After Chapter 300, the more you read, the less interesting it becomes.

What follows is not Li Feiyu who kills people and sets fires, but Li Feiyu who talks a lot. Although he is procrastinating, he has absolute strength, but he ends up being annoyed by flies? It's really outrageous

There was a change of people starting from Da Jin. It suddenly felt wrong. Luan Xinghai wrote it well before. What did Da Jin suddenly become? This is

Isn't it ridiculous to see that the old monster in Dajin Qiong is still alive? He has a weird personality when his life span is over. People who should be killed when the devil invades are forced to live for more than a hundred years. It's nonsense for people to recognize Tuotian Demonic Skill in the grassland. No one in Jin Dynasty, which is isolated from the world in Chaos Xinghai, knows how a few prairie barbarians recognized Tuotian Demonic Skill.

It will only disgust Old Devil Han