Douluo Dalu: Peerless with Twin Spears

1. It's a bit awkward. The male protagonist's killing in the early stage was decisive and ruthless. It was written like a child with middle school syndrome pretending to be cool. I didn't feel that he had the temperament of a killer. It seemed like it was written just to pretend to be cool. Maybe I've never been a killer and can't understand this feeling. And the second martial soul, Barrett, made me laugh directly. 2. It's not a brainless stallion story, it's pretty good. But some parts of the plot are really not as good as straight up, and it makes people uncomfortable watching it. 3. The rhythm is okay, the plot is complete, and the key points are highlighted. 4. The character design was changed a bit too much. For example, the prototype of bbdong was decisive in killing, but as the pope, he must have a deep palace. The result was that the male protagonist went berserk just because he visited the teacher. I can't understand it, I can't forget Yu Xiaogang, I'm ambiguous, and I don't want people to respect the teacher. This part is a bit awkward to watch. 5. It's not really mind-blowing, but it's not very enjoyable either. It's fun to read Douluo Fans, this book is quite satisfactory.

After reading the whole novel, it was quite interesting at the beginning. He is cold-blooded and cruel, and wants to kill everyone with one strike. I don't understand why the author wants to change his character. He is already very strong. Why would a strong person change his character? ? He still has to enter Shrek, and he also has to act. From the moment he entered Shrek, I kept jumping to watch it. The more I read, the worse it became. Until the finale, when he didn't change his character, there was really nothing to say. Once he changed it, the whole novel was useless.

It feels pretty good, but I've read a lot of Douluo fanfics with many female protagonists, and it's a bit awkward to read this one, especially when he kills the stubborn pig, and there should be at least a slight change in his attitude towards those female protagonists.

The protagonist was a killing machine in his previous life. Bibi Dong became the protagonist's protection object, and later she understood Bibi Dong's feelings. Tang Yuehua taught the protagonist about life and emotions. Hu Liena is the catalyst for the protagonist's change in the most direct way. Zhu Zhuqing looks a bit like the person the protagonist has let down in his previous life.

Not bad -I feel like I really have nothing to say in the early stage, it's super beautiful, but after I entered Shrek Academy, it felt a bit boring, and then the further I saw Shrek, I couldn't stand it anymore. -Also why do you feel that Bibi Dong is portrayed so brainlessly? As the queen of Wuhun Palace in the anime, I think the city should be very deep. Can she at least be able to keep her composure? Why does the protagonist just do something, and then Bibi Dong cries, becomes irritable, or stands up or something?

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In the early stage, I thought Bibi Dong's feelings were deep, but in the later stage, it wasn't one woman after another, speechless, and it was said that it was a single female protagonist.

Bull, the fourth ring single-handedly killed an 80,000-year-old soul beast, and then the seventh ring was seriously injured by a soul saint.

Is this a single heroine?

Finished reading ∠( ᐛ ∠)_