Douluo Dalu: Peerless with Twin Spears

I hope to write the heroine to death in the future, and give a testimony about killing my wife. I can guarantee that if I write it like this, it will be popular. What is the use of the heroine? She is always the protagonist. The way forward

After reading about 10 chapters, I realized that the author doesn't know how to control comments? It's okay if it's a bit venomous, and it's a trivial matter to choose a bad name. You can read the comments on the previous chapters, they have everything. If you delete those comments that make no sense, at least it won't affect reading. For someone like me who likes to read comments, I didn't see any interesting comments. They were all about this and that, which is really boring. Deleted some negative reviews, out of sight and out of mind. Some of them may be trumpet accounts of competitors.

Tian'e Soul-Destroying Spear

After reading a few chapters, I want to ask when the protagonist will grow? I am talking about spiritual and character growth Cold eyes, cold heart, the word [cold] appears very frequently! Is this cool? The protagonist was a killer in his previous life. What happened to the killer? The killer is also flesh and blood and has emotions, right? Even Gin will reveal a lewd expression when meeting Haibara Ai, okay? When I saw the introduction, it was said to be a high-IQ intellectual battle, but the author's intellectual battle is reflected in his ice-cube face and ice-cube heart?

One last explanation, these plots are all foreshadowing what follows. Think more about why the protagonist doesn't kill Tang San. One is because of the poison, and the other is because of Tang Hao who is hiding in the dark. No matter how powerful the protagonist is, he is only a soul king. Can he compete with Tang Hao? This book is not an invincible system book. It appears to be invincible, but then it is slapped in the face with all kinds of pretentiousness. Even if Tang San opposes the protagonist in the future, it is impossible for him to be crushed by the protagonist without thinking. Anyone who has seen how powerful Tang San's poison is knows. Moreover, everyone knows Tang San's character in the original work. After all, he was reborn and a disciple of the Tang Sect. How could I become an idiot and brainless in a novel written by a Douluo fan? And if the protagonist's personality doesn't change, how can he break into the enemy? How do you get your own opportunities after gaining trust? Here, I only give a general idea, something like this. Don't change your character, be cold, and make others think that the protagonist is dangerous when they see him? Killing people on sight? Fight all the way to the end? Then I might as well finish ten chapters, make an appearance in one chapter, have a system that is invincible, and stop when I see a woman. Seeing that Tang San and Yu Xiaogang were directly killed, they then retired to the mountains and forests to live happily. Novels inherently have stories, and the people in them must also have their own souls. For example, why everyone hates Yu Xiaogang so much? This character represents what he should be like. Although my writing skills are lacking a lot and my writing is not that good, I am trying my best to shape the characters in it and try to retain the original characters' personalities. Although there will be some small changes, will you do it as a fan? Can they all be moved here? I try my best not to change the character of the original characters. What a novel looks like is the ups and downs, layout and plot development in the process. It's not about being a little unhappy after reading a chapter and then going straight to death. Why this chapter is written like this is all based on my consideration. The holes left before are being filled step by step. I didn't write this book just for fun, I just wanted to create a complete and wonderful story. If after reading this book for two or three hundred chapters, you feel that the previous chapters seem poisonous, and you come to scold me at any time, I won't refute a word. What I am saying today is that I hope that everyone who likes this book will understand and not be led by individual people. I update four times a day, and even five times a day. Read one chapter or one minute or two minutes, but it did take me five hours to write it, and this does not include the situation of Kawen. I'm not a tentacle monster, I'm a bit slow at coding, and I'm not a master, and I don't have such good writing skills. However, I try my best to improve the plot of each chapter. Although there are some typos, Lu Lu was careless and didn't have time to check too many times. Please bear with me, everyone. From now on, try to appear as little as possible or not at all. Finally, thank you for your great support and love. Your support is the biggest motivation for my creation.

When I read Chapter 30, I bought the whole thing. I started reading it when I saw Bibi Dong as a single female protagonist. Then I saw that the author mentioned that there can be at most 2 female protagonists, Bibi Dong and Hu Liena. At this time, I already felt that I couldn't stand it anymore, so I endured and continued reading. After all, the relationship between Bibi Dong and Pig's Feet was handled very well and it was very comfortable to watch. By the time we reach more than 60 chapters, who the hell is Tang Yuehua? ? ? Since Pig's Feet is ready to kill Tang San, Tang Hao and destroy the Haotian Sect, why don't you take Tang Yuehua into your harem? ? ? There are so many women, why do you have to accept Tang Yuehua? ? ? The character design of Pig's Knuckle was created by Bibi Dong wholeheartedly. Judging from the way you wrote it, there must be at least several people in the harem. The poisonous point of accepting Tang Yuehua suddenly made me unable to stand it anymore. I turned to the last chapter to see how many people you have accepted. For those who haven't watched it yet, let me reveal that the heroines include Bibi Dong, Tang Yuehua, Hu Liena, and Zhu Zhuqing Can you change your profile? ? Forget about the two heroines, just list the heroines. Money is a trivial matter, and it's mainly a waste of time.

Is there anything particularly eye-catching?

The author's emotional drama makes me embarrassed and pick my feet.

In a harem novel, you would like to introduce a single female protagonist? You don't even need to be embarrassed, right? Pure primary school student writing style

It's okay to be an enemy to the protagonist, but I don't like calling others brothers and then killing them.