Start with Mr. Zombie

Even if you write according to the plot, it won't be so confusing. Is there a sea between the articles? It doesn't match up at all. I was fighting one second and woke up the next. There is also the god of transcendence, the Patriarch. This is the first time I heard that the leader of Maoshan is from Longhu Mountain. Longhu Mountain and Maoshan are both famous Taoist mountains. They are both Zhengyi Sanshan (Longhu, Maoshan, and Zaoge). Longhu Mountain is the gate of Tianshi Sect, and Maoshan is mainly the gate of Shangqing Sect. The author still needs to read more, otherwise this will be confused and make people laugh.

The writing is good, but does the author have any misunderstanding about the realm of zombies? It would be too much for Fei Zhan to kill all the people on Maoshan Mountain! ! !

I can't understand what's going on.

It's hard to write it all in one sentence, and there are too many shortcomings. 1. The protagonist is sometimes rude and brings out something without Uncle Jiu suspecting it, and Uncle Jiu's character is completely ruined. 2. There are a lot of typos, which affects reading, and some paragraphs are not read smoothly. 3. The level of cultivation is not rigorous. Flying zombies, drought demons, and thousand-year-old monsters have all appeared. Are they the ones in Uncle Jiu's era? Flying zombies are possible, but monsters with thousands of years of cultivation are impossible. Do you know how strong monsters that have been trained for thousands of years are? It is even more impossible for Drought Demon. Do you think this is a dead date? What awesome things exist? 4. The founder of Maoshan is not Zhang Sanfeng, but the Three Mao Zhenjun, namely the three brothers Mao Ying, Mao Gu, and Mao Zhong. The founder is Tao Hongjing. Zhang Sanfeng is a member of the Wudang Sect and the Sanfeng Sect. Please understand before you write. You can search it. If you don't understand anything, writing nonsense will only make people think you are illiterate. 5. If you don't have it and don't know how to search it, you can find it if you create it by yourself. Longhu Mountain was created by Zhang Daoling, and you wrote it was a branch of Maoshan Mountain. It sucked in the end, so this book deserves two and a half stars.

Quite average

I suspect that the author has never seen any of Uncle Nine's movies. I didn't feel like watching the first few scenes. I don't know why there are so many good reviews. Is it because of them?